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怎么来学习一篇9分范文？如何最大化地利用它？
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题目：
More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
范文：
Cities are often seen as places of opportunity, but there are also some major drawbacks of living in a large metropolis. In my opinion, governments could do much more to improve city life for the average inhabitant.
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In conclusion, governments could certainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for all city residents.
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评析：
本题是一道多问题类型话题，①需要考生解析居住城市所遇见的困难，②以及给出政府所能做出的改善建议。
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被动句+表语从句+非限制定语从句+2句there be句+2句定语从句
large cities —— a large metropolis —— urban areas —— major cities
a better life —— places of opportunity
difficulties —— major drawbacks
do much more —— tackle these problems —— implement a range of measures
improve city life —— enhance the quality of life
everyone —— average inhabitant —— all city residents
rural areas —— a small town or village —— provincial towns —— regions
public transport —— vehicle —— traffic
public transport systems are usually overcrowded —— congestion
注意：同义替换并不代表意思相同，只要类似即可
最后是来自Simon考官的友情提示：
不要在连接词上费太多心思，用first of all替代first绝非文章的亮点所在！
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作文高分：雅思大作文高分范文库，十个话题全覆盖，哪里不会点哪里！