四级作文评分标准

大学英语四级考试写作部分考核的技能和要求

能完成一般性写作任务，能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等，能写常见的应用文，能在半小时内就一般性话题或提纲写出不少于120词的短文，内容基本完整，中心思想明确，用词恰当，语意连贯。能掌握基本的写作技能。具体考核的技能包括： 思想表达：

1． 表达中心思想

2． 表达重要或特定信息

3． 表达观点、态度等 篇章组织：

4．围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，重点突出

5．连贯地组句成段，组段成篇 语言运用

6．运用恰当的词汇

7．运用正确的语法

8．运用合适的句子结构

9．使用正确的标点符号

10．运用衔接手段表达句间的关系（如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等） 写作格式

11．运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式

大学英语四级作文评分原则及标准

1． 评分原则：总体评分法，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。

2． 评分标准：思想表达正确；意义连贯；无重大语法错误。具体标

准可分为五个等级，每个等级都可以上下浮动一分。

--- 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

--- 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，担有少量语言错误。 --- 基本切题。有些地方思想表达不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有些是严重错误。

--- 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

--- 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有语言错误，且多数为严重错误。

What Electives to Choose?

1. 各大学为学生开设了各种各样的选修课

2. 学生出于各种原因选择不同的选修课

3. 以我自己为例……

Composition 1

Nowadays, there is a great variety of electives in colleges for students to choose from, and they have the freedom to choose whatever they like.

Students choose different electives for different reasons. Some students simply choose what they like. They think they will gain some fun from it. Others choose what they think is good to them, so they can learn knowledge and skills from the course although they may not be much fun. Also some students choose a course just because its teacher is famous, so they can have the honor to learn with great masters. Take myself as an example. My elective this term is “English Writing Skills”. The reason why I choose it is because I ’m crazy about English. Furthermore, English writing is a skill essential to job-hunting today. I’ve enjoyed the course, and benefited a lot from it as well.

Composition 2

Every university is suffer many electives for us. That we can choose a right one. For about me, I choose the Art. When I was a little girl, I’m like dance and sing, of cause I enjoy right now. But now I’m like listen the English music, for example. Promises is not come easy: Season in the sun; dying in the sun; I believe I can fly and so on.

That when I choose the Art, my life there is a great change. I can take some performents, and make some friend. We enjoy our times when we are fall in the plays that our university’s lives becomes very happy.

So I believe my choose is right. But now, my university ’s life ending later. It made me sad, I want remember for ever. I hope everything will goes well. We will have a bright future. Whatever difficulty it is!

Composition 3

With the fast development of economy, what we need today is not a specialist but a person who knows more than one field. Therefore, many universities have set up variety of electives for students to choose. Students choose these electives for different reasons. Some may just want to get the scores, however, some may be really interested in that course.

Take myself for example, I choose 3 electives this term. One is about ads, the other two are about laws. On the one hand, I’m interested in laws. Even though my major isn’t law. I can gain that knowledge by the electives. On the other hand, all the

teachers are so kind that I can get along with. I do like these courses.

In my view, we should not consider scores more than the courses themselves. In brief, only if you love your courses can you study well and become all-round developed.

Composition 4

Kinds of electives are given for students by Universities. And students have a lot of choice for this.

Then students always choose different electives for the different causes in the same time. Firstly, different people have different interesting. What more, they often like do what they favorite. Secondly, some wants to choose a class that helps him or her more for his or her career. Thirdly, the student whose parents hope him to do something, which they think will be necessary to their children. Above all, many choices are taken by various people.

Considering this, take me for instens, in my opinion, one make a choice should consider all parts and not do what regent him a life. I choose the elective not only I loved, but also helped me in my lives. It is on the spot just also. I like English and I believe it is useful for me and much more necesserty than others, so I choose it.

Composition 5

With the development of society, more and more college students are pursuing more abilities in order to make them more strong. To meet the high demand, almost every university set many kinds of optional courses for their students and supply a chance to students to learn more knowledge.

Facing so many options, students make their decision basis on their own situation. Some students want to study more so as to obtain some advantage in looking for jobs after graduate. Some students choose the course just for their interests and to make their campus life more colorful.

As for me, I make my choose not only to gain more knowledge, but I have considered the future and the challenge I will meet in persuing jobs. So much valuable knowledge are in front of you, why not make a favorable choice? It will broaden our minds to the world and we will benefit from different minds of different fields. What’s more, there will be more chances for us if we have more abilities.

Composition 1---14分

Composition 2---2分

Composition 3--- 11分

Composition 4--- 5分

Composition 5 --- 8分

写作中的常见问题

1） 下笔无语或千言不见主题

2） 词句弃短而用长，弱点尽现

3） 细节丰富且冗长，层次不清

4） 笔下龙飞又凤舞，考官糊涂

应对策略

1） 审题是关键，尊重提纲

2） 词句用准确，简明扼要

3） 层次分清楚，主题突出

受汉语思维的影响，学生在写作中常常会出现这样的一些情况，例如，不善于开门见山，缺乏中心句和主题句的意识，行文过半还没有谈到主题，还没有等到一步一步从次要观点的阐述过渡到主要观点，时间已经所剩无几，不得不匆忙得出结论而收尾。针对这种情况，要学会写主题短和主题句，遵循英文写作的“线性思维模式”。从全篇看，四级作文大多分为三大部分，即提出问题，分析问题和解决问题，三部分缺一不可。从每段来看，第一句应是主题句，表达本段的中心思想，其后的每一个观点都应围绕这个主题句展开。一般应在段首就亮出主题句，避免主题句放在段中或段尾无法明显辨别而引起混乱，所有扩展句都有紧扣主题。

4） 书写规范，卷面整洁。

段落写作的基本标准：统一性，完整性和连贯性

段落写作中，要本着一个原则：一个段落表达一个要点，即段落中所有的句子都围绕一个要点展开，任何与这个要点无关的句子，都会使段落产生杂乱无章、逻辑混乱、意思上跳跃的感觉，甚至会严重偏离主题。所谓完整性，就是在段落写作时，提出观点后，需要在文中加以阐述和说明，将意义表达完整。连贯性一方面是通过是指将全文按照逻辑顺序展开，其次就是连接词和过渡手段的有效使用。 段落写作中忌讳的问题

1） 一个段落，多个要点

2） 一段中出现与本段要点、中心句无关的句子

3） 缺乏连贯手段，违背英语语言表达习惯

4） 时态、人称和数前后不一致

学生作文中常常出现的问题

1) 词语使用不当

2) 重复累赘

3) 非谓语动词

4) 同义词，近义词、形近词及固定词组的搭配

5) 主谓和并列成分的一致

6) 句子结构

7) 汉式英语

8) 标点和连接

9) 平行结构

10) 其他

11种最常用的句子结构及写法

在这个结构中我们常常在做主语的名次后面加上各种修饰语，如介词短语、不定式短语、定语从聚合分词短语等，从而大大增加了这一结构的表现力。例如：

1.There are so many people rushing into the city everyday.

2.There are still some problems to be solved.

3.There are many different kinds of vegetables, fruits and meat that people can buy on the market.

4. There is no denying / doubt /question that….

5. There is no point / sense / use doing …

英语中还有许多不加否定词的否定结构，如果能在文章中正确的加以利用，可以使句子显得生动活泼，不拘一格。比如，有一些词和短语，它们不胜就有否定意义。这些词当中有：

介词：against, beyond, but, except, without, off, out…

形容词和动词：absent, reluctant, lack, want in, fail…

还有一些短语：at a loss, in vain, out of the question, rather than, too…to, by no means, let alone, much less, neither…nor…

还有一些具有半否定意义的词和词组：barely, hardly, few, little, rarely, seldom, scarcely…

1. Women fail to get the equal rights in some countries.

2. This is by no means the best way to solve the problem of energy crisis.

3. It is often said that “It is never too late to learn.”

4. We could hardly see any people who could afford a private car in China several years ago.

在写作当中，我们不时要用到比较结构，用来比较正反两个方面或是同类的人或物，使文章增加说服力。

1. Though bicycles run more slowly than cars, they are very handy and convenient.

2. English is the language most widely spoken in the world.

3. Some computers can work 500000 times as fast as human beings.

4. Nothing is __________er than to do _________

5. One cannot emphasize the importance of _________ more/too much.

6. The more …, the more…

“it”在英语中除了用作普通的代词外，还常常在句中充当形式主语、形式宾语以及引导强调句等。这些功能常常使句子色彩丰富，易于表达。

1. It is necessary for us to master a foreign language.

2. I found it benefit me a lot to read much.

3. It was then that people began to realize the importance of controlling population.

4. It goes without saying that ….

5. It must be admitted that …

6. It must be kept in mind that…

7. It is said /universally acknowledged that…

8. It has been estimated that…

“What”用作连接代词引导名词从句，在句子中可以充当主语、宾语、主语补足语和介词宾语等成分，使用这一结构有时可以表达较为复杂的思想。例如：

1. What we are doing today is something never dreamed of by our forefathers.

2. With books, we can learn a lot of things we do not know, be aware of what happened in the past as well as what is going to happen in the future.

在英语写作中我们也常常要用到被动结构，特别损失当我们对行为对象的兴趣比对行为者的兴趣更大时，尤其是这样。这种情况在议论文写作中更为常见。

1. Many difficulties can be overcome if we build up confidence in ourselves.

2. “Time is money” is an old saying, but its true meaning can only be understood by those hard-working people.

英语中用来比较原因这一概念的结构有多种。在写作中我们常用：

1）表示原因的从句；

“for”, “as”, “because”, “since”, “seeing that”, “considering that”, “now that”

1.Scientists are devoting themselves to the study of a new model of car, for the old ones both consumed fuel and polluted the air.

2）各种短语及简单句

2. Diligence is the key factor of success.

3. There are mainly three reasons for the great change.

在英语写作中，我们多用一些词引导结果从句来表示结果的概念，有时也用一些介词短语或其他结构来表达结果。

1. We should further develop our higher education in order that more people may go to college.

2. The result may be that our cities will be polluted more seriously. 在表示某一动作必须在某一条件下才能完成的时候，要用到表示条件的一些表达方法，英语中，这种结构通常用从句、介词短语等构成。

1. If you want your dream to come true, health will be the most important ingredient of your success.

2. Only by taking effective measures can men prevent this kind of pollution.

英语中许多表达数量的方法和汉语的表达习惯的大不相同，这一点在写作中要特别加以注意。下面是一些常用的表达方法。

1. It is estimated that the population of Xian has increased from 6 million in 1990 to 8 million today.

2. In five years the milk consumption of the city increased by 25%.

3. Today, on the same planet, we have 5,000 million people, a figure 12.5 times as big as that 1,000 years ago.

英语中用来表达位置与方向的方法有很多。但初学写作者应注意尽量用一些简明、准确地方法和结构。下面是一些常用的句型和结构。

1. The school is situated in the east part of the city. It covers 50 mu.

2. The newly-built university is located in the city center.

3. My hometown lies on the shore of a beautiful, tranquil lake.

过渡词的使用和文章的润色

过渡词也称为连接性词语。它是一种关系指引词，其作用是用来连接或转折上下文，是文章保持连贯、自然、通顺。过渡词可以用于句子和句子之间的连接，还可以用于段落与段落之间的连接。

一段文章里是否使用过渡词，效果大不一样。它不但影响一段文章的连贯性，而且直接影响文章的质量。下面我们将根据不同过渡词的不同功能和作用将它们分成若干类，分别加以介绍。

At present, currently, recently, today, lately, in the meantime, meanwhile, at the same time, since then, soon, soon after, afterward

1. At present / Currently / Today / Recently / Lately, more and more people are realizing the importance of protecting our environment.

2. Meanwhile / In the meantime / At the same time, students should have more free time for reading what they like.

3. Since then, people have become more and more interested in learning English.

First of all,

In the first place,

Firstly.., secondly.., thirdly…

First…, then…, finally…

Our standard of living today is much higher than it was before. But this does not mean that the spiritual quality of our lives has also improved. What should we do?

can’t buy happiness. Don’t be a slave to it. with friends and family. birds sing, and see the beautiful scenery.

Because, for this reason, because of, duo to, accordingly, consequently, as a result, in this way, therefore, so, thus, hence,

1) Because of / Due to science, we now live more comfortable, safer and convenient lives.

2) Our standard of living today is much higher than it was before. As a result, more and more people can afford their own houses and cars.

3) He was told to speak briefly; accordingly, he cut short his remarks.

4) It is important to have good plans if we want to be successful. In this way / So / For this reason / Because of this / Therefore / As a result / Consequently, it is most important to have a good beginning whenever we want to accomplish something.

Conversely, On the other hand, Despite, In spite of, Likewise, Similarly,

Equally important, Nevertheless

1) Despite / In spite of all the heartaches and the difficulties, a college education is still our best passport to success.

2) If we lacked freedoms, then people could not say what they felt. On the other hand / Conversely, if we lacked laws then society would be disorderly and violent.

3) Jones’ case was dismissed. Similarly, so were the charges against Smith.

4) Congress can pass a law and the president may sign it. Nevertheless, the Supreme Court can declare it unconstitutional.

Besides, Furthermore, In addition, Moreover, In particular, What’s more,

1) Now it’s the time to become concerned with the future of ours. In particular, we must pay enough attention to the problem of pollution.

2) As this society looks to education highly, there is a sense of dignity and pride in receiving a college education. In addition / Furthermore / Besides / What’s more, I believe with college education I can serve my fellow men and my country better.

In brief, In conclusion, In short, in summary, To sum up, As has

been noted, As I have said,

1) In conclusion, let us encourage the exchange of ideas and opinions by means of debates.

2) In short / In brief / To sum up /In summary, I think that the time has come for the introduction of strict measures to protect our environment.

3) As has been noted / As I have said, country life is more beneficial than city life.

Everybody knows that, Generally speaking…, As the proverb says…, It is true that…, There is no doubt that…, It is known to everybody…,

Many people are much interested in the question that …

…This is a question which is widely discussed not only in China but also in other countries.

From this point of view,

On account of this we can find that…

Thus, this is the reason why we must…

In summary…

On the whole…

Eventually…

In my opinion…

Personally

如何写好作文的开头和结尾

一. 开头万能公式:

一篇文章的开头基本决定了阅卷老师对一篇文章的印象, 也基本决定了一篇文章的得分. 四. 六级考试虽然对作文的要求不高(120—150个词). 但麻雀虽小, 五脏具全, 也应该讲究开头和结尾. 而考试时, 有些同学只知道按提纲敷衍成文, 不知道好的文章应该有一个自然得体引人注目的开头; 而另外一些同学则相反, 在第一段里使用固定或经典句型, 这就可以成为老师阅卷时加分的闪光点. 下面给大家介绍几种开头常用的方法及其固定句型:

1. 对立法

对立法的句型适用于有争议性的主题. 文章开头首先引出其他人的不同看法, 然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法. 例如:2000年6月大学英语四. 六级考试的作文( Is a Test of Spoken English is Necessary? )就属于这种类型, 因此, 我们就可以采用对立法开头, 例如: the test of spoken English, ..

可供参考的更多的对立法的句型如下:

1) When it comes to… some people believe that… Others argue / claim that the opposite/reverse is true. There is probably some truth in both arguments / statements, but (I tend to the former/latter…)

2) No, it is commonly / generally / widely believed / held / acknowledged that… They claim / believe / argue that…But I wonder / doubt whether….

2. 现象法

现象法的句型适用于对某种社会现象, 倾向或社会问题进行剖析的文章. 现象解释型作文在四级考试中出现的频率最高, 从1995年6月至2004年6月, 现象解释型作文共考了六次. 这类文章一开始首先引出现象或者问题, 然后评论.

例如:1998年1月大学英语四, 六级的作文( Harmfulness of Fake Commodities ),我们就可以采用现象法的句型行文:

fake commodities For one thing, …

this problem. First of all, …

可供参考的更多现象法的句型列举如下:

1) Recently the issue of the problem of / the phenomenon of …has been brought into focus. / has been brought to public attention.

2) Inflation / corruption / social inequality…is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now / constantly.

3. 观点法

自1995年6月以来, 观点论证型作文试题共考了两次, 分别是在1999年1月和1997年1月. 这类作文的特点是作者一开篇就直截了当地提出对要讨论的问题的观点, 即文章的中心思想.

我们以1999年1月的大学英语四, 六级作文( Don’t hesitate to Say “No ” )为例:

should not hesitate to say “No ” on many occasions. 可供参考的更多的观点法的句型如下:

1) Never in history has the change of …been as evident as …/ Nowhere in the world / China has the issue / idea of … been more visible / popular than…

2) Now there is a growing awareness / recognition of the necessity to … Now people become increasingly aware / conscious of the importance of …

3) Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude / idea that…

4. 引用法

你若对一些名人名言比较熟悉, 那么使用引用法开头将是一个不错的吸引老师眼球的办法:在文章开篇先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 再引出文章要展开论述的观点.

例如:1996年1月大学英语四级考试作文: The Two-day Weekend, 若采用引用法开篇, 则可以这样行文:

“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. the reform of the two-day weekend system is of great benefit to their daily life …

可供参考的更多引用法的经典句型列举如下:

1) “Education is not complete with graduation.” Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion.

2) In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complaints as this “…. ”.

5. 比较法

比较法句型主要用于通过对过去与现在两种不同的倾向, 态度和观点的比较, 引出文章要讨论的主题. 例如:2000年1月大学英语四, 六

级考试作文: How to Succeed in a Job Interview? 我们就可以采用比较法开篇:

tuition and fees at college the country.reform of our country in recent years, …

可供参考的更多的经典句型列举如下:

1) Until recently …had been regarded as …But there is changing now. With the growing demand for …, people…

2) People used to think that …( In the past, …) But few people now share this view.

6. 问题法

问题法句型主要用于讨论一个有争议性主题的文章. 文章开头用一个要讨论或解答的问题设问, 可以以下激起读者的兴趣.

我们还拿2000年6月大学英语四. 六级考试的作文( Is a Test of Spoken English is Necessary? ) 举例说明, 既然这是一个有争议性主题的文章, 我们可以用问题法开篇:

Is a test of spoken English is necessary?

可供参考的更多问题法的句型列举如下:

1) Should / What …? Opinions of … vary greatly. Some think of …as …. Others argue that … But in my opinion, …

2) How do you think of …? How do you see …? I n answer to these questions, we must …

3) Why do…? Many people often ask the question like this.

二 结尾万能公式：

作文有了好的开头，这就给我们得高分奠定了一个好的基础。但是，仅仅这样还是不够的，文章的结尾也不容忽视，因为好的结尾会使读者对全文的中心思想留下深刻的印象，可以增添文章的效果和说服力，让人深思，回味无穷。现在给大家介绍一些结尾常用句型。

1． 结论性

结论性句型主要用于通过文章前面的分析结果，引出文章的中心思想和论点。

例如：1994年6月大学英语四，六级考试作文：Reading Selectively or Extensively? 我们就可以这样收尾：

reading selectively is the best policy in study.

更多可供参考的结论性句型列举如下：

1) In summary / In a word, it is more valuable …

2) The analysis we have made confirms a sound conclusion that …

2． 后果性

本句型用于揭示如果所讨论的问题不能解决，或不采取某种行动的话，将会产生的严重后果。例如：1998年1月大学英语四，六级作文：Harmfulness of Fake Commodities, 我们可以采用后果性句型收尾：

fake commodities, a severe threat to the healthy development of our socialist market.

更多可供参考的后果性句型列举如下：

1) We must search for an immediate method, because the present situation of …, if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of …

2) Obviously, if we ignore / are blind to the problem, there is every chance that …will be put in danger.

3． 号召性

号召性句型主要用于呼吁读者行动起来，或敦促采取行动或对某一问题提请注意。

我们还拿1998年1月大学英语四。六级考试作文：Harmfulness of Fake Commodities 举例，若采用号召性句型结尾，则可以这样行文： fake commodities.

更多可供参考的号召性句型列举如下：

1) It might be time to heed the warning of … and to place considerable / great / special emphasis on the improvement / promotion of …

2) There is no doubt / denying that special / immediate attention must be paid to the problem of…

3) It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency.

4． 建议性

建议性句型主要用于在结尾处对文章所讨论的问题提出建设性的意见，其中包括建议和具体的解决问题的方法。例如：1998年1月大学英语四。六级考试作文：Harmfulness of Fake Commodities 采用建议性句型结尾，则可写成： that fake commodities

可供参考的建议性句型列举如下：

1) While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways. The most popular is …. Another method is … Still another one is ….

2) Awareness / Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation.

5． 方向性

方向性句型与建议性句型类似，唯一的差别就是方向性句型结尾时对问题的解决提出总的，大体的方向或者指明前景。

例如：若采用方向性句型对1998年1月大学英语四，六级考试作文：Harmfulness of Fake Commodities 收尾，可以采用下列句型： fake commodities,

可供参考的方向性句型列举如下：

1) Many solutions are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be recognized in a wider way.

2) No effective remedy is at hang to resolve the problem …. But the general awareness of the significance of …might be the first step in the right direction.

3) The great challenge today is …There is much difficulty, but…

6． 意义性

在文章结尾的时候，用下面意义性句型可以从更高，更新的角度指出所讨论问题的重要性及其深远的意义。例如：2000年6月大学英语四，六级考试作文：Is a Test of Spoken English is Necessary? 若采用意义性句型结尾可写成：

spoken English does not necessarily mean anything in our English study.

可供参考的意义性句型列举如下：

1) Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay-off might be worth the effort. It will not only benefit …but also benefit …

2) In any case, whether it is positive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly…

三 如何写好文章的主题段落

针对考生在写作中布局混乱的问题，我们给大家提供一个写作摸板：

在某种场合，发生某个现象，并提供一些相关数据，然后列出这种现

象的三个原因，并将三个原因总结为一个最主要的原因，最后提出避免这种现象的两个办法或陈述个人观点。总的来说，利用这个模板写英语作文，是相当容易的，你只要将适当的内容，填写到对应的方括号中，一篇通顺的英语作文即可完成。下面就是这个模板。

Nowadays ，there are more and more [某种现象] in [某种场合]. It is estimated that [相关数据]. Why have there been so many [某种现象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is [原因一]. What ’s more, [原因二].The third one is [原因三]. To sum up, the main course of [某种现象] is due to [最主要原因]. Considering all these, [个人观点/解决办法]. For one thing, [个人观点一/解决办法一]. For another, [个人观点二/解决办法二]. All these will certainly contribute to [某种现象的改进].

为便于大家理解，我们特意用这个模块，写了一篇关于2003年1月四级真题作文，请大家观摩一下。 our society. at least 80 percent of people admitted that they had told lies.

dishonest behaviors? people neglect the moral values in pursuit of their own interests. the unfair competition worsens the situation. a lot of

dishonest people may escape punishment easily. dishonest behaviors a lack of effective laws and regulations of supervision in our society. I still want to argue that it pays to be honest in the long run. behaving yourself in an honest way can win respect from others. being honest is an essential step towards our spiritual civilization. the progress of our society.

提高写作的一条捷径就是先进行模仿。考生若能灵活套用我们所提供的方法，就能很快抓住四级作文的精髓，这样，准备考题时才能事半功倍，应对考题时就能做到从容不迫，游刃有余。

下面为同学们提供几篇四级作文的范文，供同学们参考。

Poster Calling for Cloth Bag Design

1． 为了响应国家限制使用塑料袋的规定，学员环保协会征集环保布袋当然设计方案。

2． 欢迎踊跃投稿，截止日期为5月31日。

布局谋篇：本文为海报类应用文，主要是号召广大学生积极参加到学院环抱协会组织的征集环抱布袋设计放案的活动中来。根据提纲，第一段可以指出该活动是响应国家限制使用塑料带的号召而开展的。第二段可以提供该活动的更多信息，如参赛规则、奖励办法、截止日期等。第三段可以说到获取更多相关信息的办法并再次鼓励大家踊跃参

加。

In recent years, our government has taken a variety of measures to promote the use of environment-friendly cloth bags instead of plastic bags. To respond to government ’s appeal, the Environment Protection Association of our department wants your brilliant ideas on the design of cloth bags.

You can submit your design electronically or in person. If your design is terrific, and you submit it before May, 31st , you may receive a certificate certifying your outstanding ability to design from us plus a bonus of 500 Yuan.

For more information, please contact us 0n the number 12345678 from 8:00 a.m. to 7:00 p.m. during the weekends. Alternatively, you can e-mail us by .

Your participation will be appreciated! Thank you for your attention!

How People Spend Their Holidays

1． 根据上表，简要描述1990年、1995年、2000年某城市人们度假

方式的情况及变化；

2． 请说明发上这些变化的原因；

3． 得出结论。

As is clearly shown in the table that there was a dramatic change in the way people spent their holiday between 1990 and 2000. Especially, in 1990, 63% of people spent their holidays at home, while the figure decreased considerably to 24% in 2000. There are three reasons for this phenomenon.

To begin with, with the development of market-oriented economy, people earn far more money than they used to, making it possible for them to afford traveling expenses. In addition, people realized the importance of getting well-informed about the outside world in this modern era to develop their potential. For example, a traveler may encounter or talk with someone of a different cultural background so as to broaden his vision. Last but not the least, by traveling outside, people are close to the nature, which is not only beneficial to both their health and peace of mind. In short , more and more people take the occasion of holiday to travel outside and relax themselves.

As far as I am concerned, I prefer to go traveling instead of staying at home during holidays. On the one hand, I love meeting different people and taking in some fresh ideas. On the other hand, it is agreed that the working is becoming the global village. No one could confine himself within his small circle of families of relatives. In brief, I have benefited a lot and will benefit more from the traveling during the holidays.

Social Practice

1． 社会实践的作用；

2． 可能产生的问题；

3． 提出建议。

Social practice has been more and more popular in universities and colleges. Students are asked to enter social society and get some idea of it. Surely social practice has many advantages. Firstly, social practice can offer students a chance to contact society and meet different kinds of people. In this way students can gain some valuable social experience, which will be useful to their future career. Secondly, students can apply what they have learned in class to practical work, thus knowing themselves more clearly. Thirdly, social practice can bring them some financial reward and make them more independent of their family.

However, some problems may arise if no correct guidance is made. For example, some students get overly interested in social practice and want to work full-time and earn money, thus neglecting their studies. And some students are likely to get in touch with the dark side of society, which will affect their future studies.

In order to carry out social practice smoothly, students should know first its objective. They should put their studies in the first place and see practice as a useful supplement. So they ought to try to strike a balance

between social practice and their studies.

点评：本篇文章属于解释性说明文。就业市场的竞争要求大学生具有丰富的社会实践，才能适应就业市场的竞争，所以现在在校大学生参与社会实践活动频繁，但如何处理好学业和社会实践的关系成为人们关注的话题。

Apartment Wanted

1． 说明自己的身份和租房的目的；

2． 简单叙述理想公寓的条件；

3． 费用问题及联系方式。

I am Robert, an oversea student from America, 19 years old. I have been studying Chinese in Beijing University for more than two years. This summer, my parents will visit Beijing and stay with me for about a month, so I am eager to find an apartment in the neighborhood of the campus for our family reunion.

I would like to rent an apartment with one living room, two bedrooms, one independent kitchen and bathroom with 24 hours hot water supply. It will be preferable if equipped with laundry facilities, broadband and cable TV .

I ’m willing to pay up to 3000 Yuan for the right apartment for one month. If you have one available, please call or e-mail me. My mobile telephone number is 87654321 and my e-mail address is 31

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Thanks!

本文要求写一个房屋的求租广告。根据提纲，首先说明自己的身份和租房目的；其次简单叙述理想公寓的条件，如房间大小、室内设施。最后告知自己能够承受的费用和联系方式。本文是一则广告，因此应该多使用口语化的表达，力求简洁、清晰，避免使用生僻词汇。

Internet and Privacy

1． 网络已经深入到我们生活的所有角落；

2． 个人隐私也已经成为网络内容的一部分；

3． 网络会对我们的私人生活产生什么样的影响。

Internet is playing a more important role in our life. We work with it, giving and receiving orders; we communicate with it, through e-mail, on-line phone, MSN; we entertain with it, playing games, watching movies, and enjoying music; we study with it, looking for and exchanging information; we live with it, doing shopping and banking. Besides, we can log on to the Internet on campus, in a bar, at home, or in a hotel, almost anywhere, anytime.

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However, if we want to enjoy the service, we have to register with many websites, typing in our name, age, gender, address, and telephone number. And these become part of contents stored on-line. With the “professional ” hackers, despiteful and harmless, as well as irresponsible website administrators, the information might be stolen and made open even sold. A case in point is the junk mails. A better example is the privacy of pop stars.

As a result, while enjoying the great convenience and speed of Internet, we are called sometimes by strangers, visited by promotions and junk ads, and cheated by someone unexpectedly. Therefore, think twice before deciding to register on-line.

本文主要就因特网和个人隐私之间的关系进行讨论。根据提纲，第一段可以介绍因特网在我们生活中的体现；第二段列举网络内容里的个人隐私，如年龄、性别、工作等；第三段主要表述并合理预测网络给私人生活带来的影响。

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