茂名市中考满分作文-英语作文范文
大作文写作:六大步骤写出精彩文章
大作文往往决定考试的成败,尤其对优等生来说,大作文起决定性作用。在写大作文时,切忌出现“跑题”文或“跑体”文。在中考前最后一个多月的时间里,该如何写好英语大作文呢?要把握以下六个步骤:
1)认真审题立意,定文章灵魂,选择一个精彩的作文题目。作文题目尽量使用短句,或巧妙地运用一些词组,准确、鲜明、深刻、集中地体现文章的大意
2)草拟提纲,打造文章之骨架。文章布局要做好3件事:安排层次段落,铺设过渡,处理开头和结尾。如作文要求中有提示句,还要围绕提示句关键词开拓思路,发挥联想。
3)写出段落主题句,理清文章脉络。一篇短文的段落一般分为引导段、主题段和结尾段,每段的主题句通常是一个语法结构完整、内容概括、用词简洁明了的单句。将主题句置于段落的开头,可使文章结构更清晰,有说服力。
4)参照提纲,紧扣主题句,打草稿。这一步虽然略显麻烦,但却十分必要,我们可以在草稿上删删改改,写出精彩文章。
5)增加美文,适当引用一些名言、谚语是十分增色的,同学们可以在平时进行适当的积累。但切忌把从没听到的句子写上去,生编硬造,表达不清。
6)再次审视关联词,检查文中的错误,改草稿,并工
整抄写。此时改错很重要,在写英语句子时要尽量避免语法、词汇及拼写方面的错误。尤其应注意动词语态、时态在人称和数上与主语的一致,名词单、复数和是否需要用冠词,以及形容词或副词在句中的位置,介词的搭配等等。此外,写作一定要有灵活性,在牢固掌握基本知识和句型的基础上,应尽量做到较高层次上的僵而不死,活而不乱。
从历年中考英语作文真题中预测今年作文走势
随着中考(微博)逼近,考生都进入了紧张的备考状态,初三老师们也一直与同学们并肩作战。在最后不到60天的时间里,如何让考生更有针对性的复习,如何让考生尽可能多得分是我们老师一直在思考的问题。
中考英语的基础部分只要学生基础扎实,一般拿分没多大问题。如今,令大部分学生头疼的问题是作文。为了让学生对中考英语作文更有信心,老师为学生们解析历年的中考英语作文题目,并作出预测,为同学们指点迷津。
首先让我们一起来看看历年的中考英语作文真题。 2006年作文题目:
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I Have a Dream”。
2007年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Things I Hate to Do”。
2008年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Story about My Parent(s)”。
2009年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words about the topic
2010年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m proud of myself
2011年作文题目:
Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m a member of…
我们可以发现,中考的英语作文其实难度并不大。命题都是与学生自身相关,为的是让学生有话可说。但是学生往往得不到高分,到底我们该如何去拿分呢?从以上题目可以看出,中考作文的写作思路通常为:what—why—how。评卷主要从内容、结构、文采三个角度给予评分。学生在写作文时,最好能够根据提示进行书写以得内容分,另外,注意连接词的使用以得结构分,同时注意遣词造句以得文采分。现在我们一起来分析2009年真题的优秀作文,让同学们更能
感受到如何去写一篇优秀作文。
If you ask me what I want to do for my school, my answer is to plant trees in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. After I plant trees there, maybe more and more students will do as me.Moreover, students can read under the trees. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. I hope our school will be a nicer place to study。
此文分三层,先提出自己的观点,然后写出为什么这么做,最后写出我会怎么做。
全文立意好,贴近实际,可行性强。从语法来看,没犯语法错误;从结构来看,用了so、after、moreover等连接词使行文更加流畅;从文采上看,文章多处用了从句,用到了形容词的比较级等。整篇文章简洁、让人读起朗朗上口,是一篇很值得借鉴的文章。
纵观历年英语作文的命题方向,初三老师预测2012年中考英语作文的三大趋势:一是与“我”相关;二是与“生活相关”;三是题目以半命题形式出现。另外,今年的作文分数增加了,所以同学们也应提高对作文的重视程度。为此,老师给各位考生一些备考建议:一是多看,通过阅读优秀作文进
行写作素材的积累。阅读的作文最好是与命题趋势相一致;二是多积累好词好句,今年作文增加的分值主要是在文采上,因此,对好词好句的积累就显得尤为重要;三是多练,俗话说:”Practice makes perfect。”学生应该通过书面练习去应用已积累的好词好句和对文章进行谋篇布局;四是坚持,众所周知,写作的提高是一个长期的过程,所以要想提高,是需要经过一个蜕变的过程,只有坚持,才能真正的提高。
认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式
时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。
说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。
根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。
如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要遵循时间状语。 文章结构清晰,重点句型出彩,可使文章在得分上提高一个档次
考虑文章的篇章结构,使用适当的连接短语,使文章结构紧凑。
常用连接词:
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…
And then,Finally,In the end,At last
2.表并列补充关系的:What ismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition
3.表转折对比关系的:However,On the contrary,but
Although+clause( 从句),In spite of+n/doing On the one hand…
On the other hand…
Some…,while others…
4.表因果关系的:Because,As
So,Thus,Therefore,As a result
5.表换一种方式表达:In other words
6.表进行举例说明:For example,句子;For instance,句子;such as+n/doing
7.表陈述事实:In fact
8.表达自己观点:As far as I know,In my opinion
9.表总结:In short,In a word,In conclusion,In summary
2012中考英语作文题目预测及参考范文一(2)
假定你是李华,最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论,你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况,请你用英语写封回信,简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果:
1.节水节电;
2.垃圾分类;
3.少用纸巾,重拾手帕;
4.步行,骑自行车或乘坐公交车。
参考词汇:低碳low carbon 纸巾tissue
注意:词数100以内(不含开头和结尾所给出的字数);可适当增加细节了,以使行文连贯;开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using
handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.
中考英语作文范文:语言学习,这是中考中的老话题,近几年常考,形式多样。
这是中考中的老话题,近几年常考,形式多样。 典型例句:
1. My favorite subject is English。
2. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。
3. It is used by travelers and business people all over the world。
4. China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China.English
becomes more and more useful.
5. So English is very important and I like English very much。
6. We have a lot of fun in the English class.
7. Our English teacher often makes us happy in the
English class。
8. I hope I can go abroad(出国) one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in
English。
9. I like English and try my best to learn it。 例文:
1、Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待,感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语,他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况,以“My English Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件,要求至少涉及其中的三个问题,并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。
提示:
When did you start learning English? (in … /…years ago)
How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English
every day…)
What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar…) What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well? (watch English
movies,sing English songs…)
参考作文:
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten
years old. But at the very beginning(在最开始的时候), listening seemed a little
difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to
tapes,watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact,
there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing
English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from
English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your
heart into it(有志者事竟成).
2、假设你叫李华,你的英国笔友Linda为了来中国参观奥运会而报名参加了汉语培训班学习汉语。她最近写信向你询问学习外语的建议。请根据下列提示和你学习英语的体会给Linda写一封回信。
注意:1.回信需要包括全部要点;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数 3.字数60左右。
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad that you’ll come to China to watch the Olympic Games. I know it
isn’t easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help.
…….
Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China
Yours,
Li Hua
参考作文:
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad that you’ll come to China to watch the Olympic Games. I know it
isn’t easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help.Firstly
it’s very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes
so that you can go over your lessons later. Secondly, try to catch every chance to
practice speaking, both in and out of class. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes.
Then try to listen and read more in Chinese. What’s more, you’d better plan your
time well and study it regularly every day.
Above all, you should be confident in yourself(有自信) and don’t give up(放弃)
whenever you meet with difficulty(遇到困难). I’m sure you will succeed through
(通过…而成功) your hard work.
Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你们学校校报举行英语征文活动, 主题是“我心目中的成功人士”, 请你写一篇文章介绍一位你心目中的成功人士(可以使你身边熟悉的人或名人)。文章必须包含以下内容:1. 人物简介;2. 人物事迹;3. 给你的启发。(共1题,10分)
要求:
1)条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确、逻辑清晰;
2)假如写的是你身边的人物,文中不能呢个出现真实的姓名和校名;
3)80词左右。
参考范文:
范文一
A Successful Person in My Mind
The successful person in my mind is Lang Lang. He is one of the youngest and
most famous pianists of our time. However, his success came at a price. He spent most of his time practicing playing the piano when he was a little boy. At the age of 17, he became famous after he was chosen to play at a musical event in the U. S. A. Lang Lang’s experiences tell me that hard work leads to success and chances belong
to those who have made good preparations.
范文二
A Successful Person in My Mind
Jim, one of my classmates, is a successful person in my mind.Jim does well in
both his studies and sports. He has won a number of awards in many different competitions. What’s more,
he is helpful and gets on well with the classmates and teachers.However, Jim’s success came through his day and night’s hard work.From
his experiences, I understand he meaning of “No pains, no gains.” And I will try my best to realize my dream.
Emily将她的烦恼写在了博客上并征求大家的建议。请了解她的烦恼并写出你(Chen Lin-from Dongying)的建议,要求字数在100词左右,建议的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总字数。
建议应包括:(1)孩子应尊重父母(2)父母经验丰富(3)父母的要求是对你的成长有好处的(4)…… (5)多同父母交流沟通。
Possible new words: respect v & n. 尊重; responsible adj. 有责任感的;
demand v. & n. 要求
Here are Emily’s problems on the Blog:
My problem is my parents. They never stop going on about(唠叨) how I should keep my room clean, keep my hair tidy and wear smart clothes. They even make me do the washing-up after dinner every night! None of my friends have got such terrible parents. What should I do?
Emily,USA
Hi, Emily. I think it’s lucky for you to have such good parents. __________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Chen Lin, Dongying
参考范文:
Hi, Emily. I think it’s lucky for you to have such
good parents. You should understand and respect them, and do what they ask you to do. They have richer experience and better advice for young people. As your parents, they surely hope you become an excellent person. Their demands are helpful for your growing up.
Every member should be responsible and do something for the family. So you should do what you can do, such as keep your room clean and do the washing-up. Remember: Learning by doing.
You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes. Teenagers should look like teenagers.
Anyway, if you have any problems, just talk with your parents.
Chen Lin, Dongying
2008满分作文A.假如你叫Ben,即将参加奥运会志愿者面试, 请你根据自己的实际情况,完成下面的自我介绍
并用一句话说明你成为志愿者后的打算。(文中所填内容必须全部用英语表达) I am Ben ,a student in Class 3,Grade 3. I am ___________ years old.My hobby is _____________.I work hard at my school and I good at ____________. To be a volunteer for Beijing Olympic games is my dream. If I become a volunteer,_________________________________________________________________________________. B.假如你是今天英语课上的值日生,请根据表中信息完成主题为
值日报告。 班 级 新 闻 演讲比赛 1.这些天我班的李佳坚持在老师的帮助下刻苦训练口语;2.星期三下午的英语演讲比赛中,李佳获得第一名。 好人好事 1. 昨天为四川灾区学生捐书200本,捐书包50个,捐款4200元
何立捐了500元,全班最多。 简要评价 …… 2. 要求:1.报告必须包括表中全部内容,可适当增加细节,但不要逐条翻译;2.简要评价必须在2个句子以上; 3.报告的开头和结尾已经给出(不计入总词数),你只需接着写4.词数必须在80左右(参考词汇:捐赠 donate) Hello,Everyone! Here are two important activities that happened this week._______________________________ That's all,thank you! 参考中考英语满分作文:A略 B.
Hello,Everyone! Here are two important activities that happened this week. These days,Li Jia,our classmate,has kept practising spoken English hard with the teacher's help. On Wednesday afternoon,she won the first prizein the English speech contest. How exciting it is!We should learn from her. Yesterday,we donated 200 books, 50 backpacks and 4200 yuan for the students in Sichuan. He Li alone donated 500 yuan,the most of all. That's good. I think that as a student,we needn't care how much we should give. Showing our love is the most important. That's all,thank you!
2010年上海中考英语作文题:I'm proud of myself