2014高考英语话题作文写作指导+佳作欣赏(7)

话题写作（七）

个人感情 （Emotions）

话○题○体○裁 ○

个人情感类话题一般很少单独命题进行写作能力考察，而是将个人的喜怒哀乐等情感溶入于具体的食物描述和故事讲述中，从心里活动的描写刻画入手，借以展现作者丰富的内心世界与情感态度。该类写作有时是讲述故事的记叙文，有事是表达自我的演讲稿等应用文。 话○题○内○容 ○

该话题内容包括：个人感情的描述刻画，如任务在具体环境或活动中表现出来的幸福，悲伤，愤怒，害怕等；表达个人情感的行为的描述，如喜怒哀乐等情感表现形式。写作过程中一般都是通过描述任务的行为，刻画人物的心里活动等来表现个人性格特征以及具体的情感态度。

话○题○词○汇 ○

1.有关感觉，情感的词语：to feel happy／pleased／sad／tired／disappointed／depressed….感到幸福／高兴／悲伤／厌倦／失望／抑郁等；to have a sense of 有…之感；enjoy 享受； Suffer from 遭受；be in (no)mood for (没)有（心情）去做某事

2.有关态度及感情的词语：to have a ….attitude towards 对于…有某种态度；in a good／bad temper 情绪好／坏；be deeply moved by 被深深感动了；be much impressed by 对…映像很深

3.有关渴望及迫切需要的词语：desire for／long for 渴望得到；feel like／be fond of 喜爱； In the hope of 希望；can’t help doing 迫不及待地

4．其他有关个人情感的词语：devote to 奉献于；beloved 挚爱的；attractive 吸引人的；fascinating 引人入胜的；be in ／out of favor with 喜爱／厌恶； be pleased／happy／glad to do 高兴的；be satisfied with／be content with 感到满意；be grateful／appreciate for 心存感激 话○题○句○型 ○

1.表示感恩、感谢的语句：Thanks to the great development of the science and technology, we are sure to live a happier and more wonderful life in the future.

2.运用倒装句表达个人对于幸福生活的情感：Not only can we enjoy delicious food and warm clothes. we also can have a good time in traveling around the world.

3.用现在分词表达对于未来美好生活的憧憬与向往：We will live harmoniously together, sharing more happiness and pleasure with each other.

4.用过去分词短语表达情感比较：Compared to the life we live today, it is more convenient and quick for us to live in the future world with advanced science and technology.

5.用简单句式表达“遗憾”等：It’s a pity that….

话○题○作○文 ○

你校英语广播站要举行一 次英语演讲比赛，话题是“畅想未来生活，享受人生欢乐”，假设你 已报名，请用英语写一份120—150词的发言稿，准备参加比赛。主要内容可以包括：份额巴西科技发展给人们的衣食住行等未来生活、学习和工作带来的影响与生活乐趣；我们应该如何准备迎接挑战，适应新生活。注意：发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, Everyone! I am glad to be able to give a talk on our future life and study here….. That’s all . Thank you !

写作指导

本写作任务要求根据提示话题和主要信息写一份演讲稿,属于描述类的应用文。该演讲的主要话题首先要对“未来生活、学习和工作等情况”加以想象和描述，并根据题目的提示，简要总结说明其原因，重在憧憬未来美好生活；文章的第二个主要内容是要表达“如何准备迎接挑战，适应新生活”，这也是个人观点和看法的表达。要认真分析未来生活变化给我们带来的机遇和挑战。作为未来世界和生活的主人，怎样做才能更好地建设美好的未来。

佳作欣赏

Hello. Everyone! I am glad to be able to give a talk on our future life and study here.. Thank to the great development of science and technology. We are sure to live a happier and more wonderful life in the future .Not only will we be provided with enough food and clothing ,we also can spent more time in traveling around the world and enjoying other amusements ,which makes our spare time more interesting and colorful .Furthermore ,we will have less stress either from our study or from the work since we can work more efficiently less time.

However, our future life is full not just of amusement and job ,but also of challenge .Therefore, we should work harder today ,making preparations to make more contributions to the development of the future society and the world .Only in this way can we adapt to the future life and enjoy ourselves when it comes.

That’s all. Thank you!

一○试○身○手 ○

随着社会的发展，人们的幸福观念也在发生变化。为此，英语老师让你们做了一份有关“幸福观”的问卷调查，调查情况见下表。请你根据表格提示信息，以“On Happiness ”为题，写一篇120-150词的英语短文，就调查情况向老师汇报。

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