初一英语尖子生卷

七年级英语尖子生辅导试卷（四）

作文训练

一．请你根据以下内容和提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。

提示：

1.2009年3月15日，你去参加李江的生日宴会。

2. 当你到达的时候，许多同学都在忙着准备生日晚会。

3. 每个人都带了生日礼物，但没有打开，还在保密状态。

4. 李江的妈妈回家以后，生日晚会正式开始，有人唱歌，有人跳舞。

李江特别高兴，她为大家表演魔术，我们很惊讶。

5. 最高兴的是我们一起吃蛋糕，吹蜡烛，说祝福的话，打开同学们的

不同礼物。

6. 李江很高兴，我们也玩得开心。

出谋划策：

根据写作提示和所提供的信息可以审定：本题是关于活动场面的记叙

文，主题是继续“我”和同学们参加李江的生日晚会的事情。要素：

人物（my classmates and Li Jiang ）、时间（on the night of March 15,

2009）、事件（birthday party）、事件发展（got there, get ready for it, singing

and dancing, blew candle and ate cakes, open the presents）、事件结果（we

felt happy）。

写作要求：用一般过去时和第一人称

主题：birthday party

二、

为了迎接父亲节的到来，《21世纪报》（21st Century）正在开展有关“父

子（女）亲情”的征文活动。假如你叫周泰（Zhou Tai），请你根据提示

展开合理想象，写一篇60词左右的短文，谈谈你的感想。

提示：

1. 向父亲要钱，并告诉他想买一些书。

2. 父亲给钱，并叮嘱要努力学习。

3. 拿着父亲给的钱直接去了青年网吧。

参考词汇：net bar, think of, feel sorry

出谋划策：

根据写作提示的信息可以审定：本题是关于人物的记叙文，主题是记

叙“我”和父亲之间的一件往事。要素：人物（my father）、地点（one day）、

事件（ask money from father ）、事件发展（went to the net bar with the

money ）、事件结果（feel sorry）。

写作要求：用一般过去时和第一人称

主题：a story between my father and me

线索：ask the money

七年级英语尖子生辅导试卷（四）答案

范文：

一、

Have a Birthday Party

It was March 15, 2009. We went to Li Jiang’s home and took part in her birthday party. When I got there, a lot of my classmates were busy getting ready for the party. They were hanging some red lights in the room. Some were putting some candles on the big cakes. Everyone took a present for her. But all the presents were not opened. So we didn’t know what they were. When her mother came back, the party started. Some girls were singing many pop songs and dancing together. Some boys told some jokes. Everyone laughed happily. Li Jiang was very happy. She played some magic for us. We were all surprised that she could play magic. The happiest things are that we blew candles and ate the cake together. We all said some lucky words to her. Then we helped her to open the presents.

Li Jiang was glad, and we also had a great time that night.

二．

Father ’s Day is coming. I am going to tell you a story between my father and me. One day, I wanted to go to the net bar, but I didn ’t have enough money. How can I go there without money? I think hard. Suddenly, I had an idea. I think of my father. So I went to him and asked 50 yuan from him. Father asked why I asked so much money. I told him to buy some books. All of my classmates have had them for a week. My father is very happy. He quickly took out the money and told me to study hard.

As soon as I got the money, I ran to the net bar. I spent all of the money playing the computer games.

Now, I feel sorry when I think of it. I feel sorry to my father. I will never do such a thing any more.