考研英语一复习资料:漫画作文基本框架
考研英语一复习资料:漫画作文基本框架
考研英语(一) 冲刺作文背诵资料
高分作文必背范文模板
编著:王桂星
四、漫画作文基本框架
1. 第一段:描述段(开头句套话+描述句+结尾句套话)
1) 开头套话句式:
(1) As is vividly/symbolically described/depicted/conveyed/illustrated in the picture/drawing cartoon given above, „„.
(2) What a vivid picture! It depicts that„
(3) From the picture/drawing/cartoon given above, we can observe that„
(4) Emerging from the drawing is an eye-catching scene in which„„
(5) The above drawing vividly presents an interesting but thought-provoking scene in which „„
(6) What vivid pictures! The first one depicts that „, and (while) the second presents a similar/an
equally disturbing (different) situation in which„ (适用于两幅漫画)
2) 描述句
1) 简要描述人物动作:Sb. is/are doing sth. in/on sp., V-ing(状语)
There is/are sb doing sth in/on sp.,V-ing(状语)
Ø伴随状语万能动词短语: turn a blind eye to the fact that „„(消极);
remind oneself that„„(积极)
Ø常用伴随动作: sigh(叹息), reflect on(思考), hesitate(犹豫), say(说到„), cheer(欢呼), look +adj (painful/helpless), „(看起来„)
2) 进一步描述人物动作 (15分以上高分作文)
(1) 以 “doing sth.” (现在分词做状语) 作为句子开头
2012-writing :Facing the bottle, lying on the ground with half of the water inside, the man on the left side thinks that “all is gone” and seems quite upset.
(2) 以 “done ” (过去分词做状语) 作为句子开头
2012-writing :Influenced by the idea that “it is fortunate that there is still something left”, the man on the right side seems quite positive and relaxed.
(3) 以 “to do” (动词不定式做目的状语) 作为句子开头
2008-writing :To overcome their physical limitations and take advantage of each other’s strength, they bind one of their legs together.
(4) with + 名词/代词+ 分词做状语
2008-writing :There are two disabled men running forward, with one of their legs tied/bound together.
高分版:
From the cartoon given above, we can observe that there are two people standing in front of a
bottle. Facing the bottle, lying on the ground with half of the water inside and half outside, the man on the left side thinks negatively that” all is gone” and seems quite depressed. However, Influenced by the positive idea that “it is fortunate that there still remains some”, the man on the right side appears to be quite relaxed and is about to pick the bottle up. (86words)
3) 套话
(1) There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
(2) There is no denying the fact that what is conveyed in the picture is thought-provoking/thought-stimulating.
(3) Simple as the cartoon is, what the picture conveys is thought-provoking/thought-stimulating.
(4) Obviously, the character(s) in it is/are doing something thought-stimulating and this will enlighten us persistently.
(5) The author ’s real purpose is not the fact itself, but to lead us to find the significant implications behind it.
2. 第二段:阐释段基本框架
1) 因果法
This picture really sets me thinking. It is a mirror, reflecting ________________________. Maybe the contributing reasons can be listed as follows. /There are several reasons contributing to this phenomenon/problem./The following reasons may be responsible for this phenomenon/problem. Firstly, „„ Secondly, „„ Finally, „„
2) 观点法
People ’s opinions differ greatly on this issue (problem, matter). Some believe that „„.. „„.. Others argue that „„„„„.. „„.. „„.. Still others hold that „„„„„.. „„.. Personally, I take it as something unacceptable (natural) because „„„. „„.. „„.. „„..
3) 正反论证
What the picture conveys is really thought-stimulating. I cannot help associating it with a traditional English saying, “______________holds the key to success. ” With its seemingly magic power, ______________can not only better accelerate individual’s development, but also serve as an efficient instrument for individuals to improve the world. Those equipped with______________are always admired and respected, because______________may endow them with more competence, chances to overcome difficulties and approach challenges. Without ______________, he will be deprived of a chance to experience setbacks or defeats in life, hence an opportunity to taste the sweetness of success.
4) 分析利弊法
We should debate the matter pro and con. There is no denying the fact that ________________have made great contributions to the development of our national economy and brought much convenience to the general public. But it is partial to stress only one side. As a popular saying goes, “Everything has two sides”. Even though the development of computer has created a lot of miracles, it also gives rise to a host of public concerns.
5) 举例法
Persistence can help us carve out a way to success, although the road leading to success is
filled with thorns and full of inevitable setbacks. Without persistence, how could Thomas Edison possibly succeed in producing the first electric lamp after thousands of times of failure. Another case in point is Helen Keller, who was born blind and deaf. However, throughout all her life, she never lost her heart. Instead, she persisted in learning how to read and write not matter how hard it is for her. Finally, he became a well-known writer throughout the world.
3. 第三段:结论段(常采用措施法)
1) 消极社会现象:
If nothing is done to check this social trend, its effects will soon be shown, which will inevitably hinder the steady development of a harmonious society. Therefore, drastic measures must be taken to arouse the public’s attention to this problem (phenomenon). On the one hand, Relevant authorities should get tough on implementing relevant rules and regulations, and those who violate them deserve to be severely punished. On the other hand, the general public should enhance their awareness and take precautions against this undesirable phenomenon. Only by enforcing these measures into practice, can our society become more harmonious and we, as individuals, embrace more brilliant future.
2) 积极成功要素:
From my perspective, on no account should we overlook the significance of ____________. /It is high time that we attached much importance to the cultivation of _____________.
For one thing, a large-scale educational campaign should be launched to inform the public that __________is essential to us; for another, the general public should foster and enhance their awareness/consciousness toward ________________. Only in this way, can we have a better life and more brilliant future.
3) 分析利弊型:
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that we should take an objective attitude toward this issue. The risks of living with it are far less threatening than the dangers of abandoning it away. Therefore, it is necessary for us to treat the issue in a reasonable way and take initiatives to absorb the essence and avoid the drawbacks of it. Only in this way can we build a more harmonious society and embrace more brilliant future.