高考作文练习 今昔对比型

高考作文练习--今昔对比型

时态：一般过去时、一般现在时（或者现在完成时）

人称：第一、第三人称

写作格式：开头（提出什么事情发生了变化）→对具体事例作对比→结论。写作方式既可采用集中比较，也可采用逐点比较。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章： 1．开头常用句型

⑴Great changes have taken place．

发生了巨大变化。

Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five year． Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China． Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life． ⑵Things have begun to improve since… 自从……以来，事情有了好转/改善。 Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load ．

2．对比常用句型

⑴…used to…, but now… ⑵…in the past, but now… ⑶once…, but now…

过去常……，但是现在…… 在过去……，但是现在……

曾经……．，但是现在……

情况已大不同了。

⑷Things are different now．

⑸But now, everything has changed． 但是现在全变了。

在作对比时，为避免句型重复，可适当变换一些句式，比如： ⑴Another change is… 再有一个变化是…… Another big change is in the housing conditions． ⑵What’s more, … 还有……

What's more, I can go to bed earlier than in the past． 3．结尾常用句型

In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience ．

练习1：NMET 2004年春季北京

按照下图的提示，写一篇题为“Changes in Our Life”的英语短文。词数100左右

Changes In Our Life

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参考例文修改自己的作文

Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life

(主题句) ． Take my family for example (过渡句) ．

in the past, but

now 对比一) ． And onceradio for news and other information, but nowon TV (对比二) ． Another big change is in the housing conditions (过渡句) ． When with furniture, but now 对比三) ．

In short , changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us

comfort and convenience (总结句) ．

练习2：你是Jack, 五年后再次来到这个城市，发现它变化很大，如图所示。你给朋友Mary

发电子邮件，告诉她这里的变化。信的开头已为你写好。

注意：1. 字数: 约100字.

2. 词汇: 立交桥. overpass私家车

private car.

Dear Mary,

The city has changed a lot in the past five years.______________________

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参考例文修改自己的作文： Dear Mary,

This city has changed a lot in the past 5 years.

First, more high buildings have appeared, which are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have been set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. Besides, many families have got cars of their own. The people's life here has become rich and colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on holidays. To my delight, I can taste delicious food of different countries such as the food of America, Japan and South Korea. And now it is easier for me to keep in touch with you than last time, for I can e-mail you in my office.

I hope you can come and experience the beauty of this city soon.

Yours,

Jack