中考书面表达答题技巧
Ⅰ. 新课程标准中关于写的要求
新的课程标准中关于五级水平(即初中毕业要求达到的水平)的要求是:
● A. 能根据写作要求,收集、准备素材;
● B. 能独立起草短文、短信等,并在教师的指导下进行修改;
● C. 能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系;
● D. 能简单描述人物或事件;
● E. 能根据所给的图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。
书面表达分类:
1、看图写话类(20006,2009年中考作文)
2、发表观点类(2007,2008年中考作文)
3、说明类
4、写信和E-mail
5、图表作文(2007,2008中考作文)
分类整理词汇:
1. Hobbies
2. Stress
3. Friendship
4. Health and sports
5. Schoolwork
6. Holiday and travel
7. Internet and Science
Ⅲ. 书面表达应对策略—三大步骤(Writing strategies---Three Steps)
Step1 Pre-writing 写前审题
① 明确体裁、阅读对象;(书信,E-mail, 日记,记叙文,说明文等)
②确定要点;
③确定主要人称和基本时态;
④集合本文要用到的关键词组和句型。
Step2 While-writing 打好草稿
①确定开头,点名主题;
②连词成句、连句成文;
③拟好结尾,表达己见;
注意:确保要点齐全。
开门见山、点名主题
连词成句、连句成文
结尾有力,表达己见
要点齐全
书信格式
Title(称呼),
The first paragraph (第一段): introduction
The second paragraph(第二段): detailed information
Conclusion (结尾段)
Signature(落款)
日记格式
星期、日期Monday May 15, 天气cloudy
正文
● Step3 Post-writing 修改定稿
● a. 主谓是否一致
● b. 时态是否协调
● c. 拼写是否有错
● d. 标点符号是否正确
● e. 用词是否得当 f.句子成份是否完整。
● 最后誊写时注意书写规范, 卷面整洁。
Travel
1. Means of Tranportation:
bike, bus, taxi, truck, train,
subway, plane, boat, ship,
helicopter „
2. Luggage (行李):
map, guidebook, camera, knife, clothes,
backpack, bathing suit, raincoat, umbrella,
towels, money, ID card, mobile phone„
3. Tickets:
one-way ticket, return ticket, half-price ticket „
4. Phrases:
get on / off, take off, arrive in / at, have a picnic,
take with, have / has been to, travel all over the world,
go on a trip, take a bus / train, ride a bike, drive a car,
by bus / car / air / sea„
练习一:
假如你叫韩玫, 在成都一家旅行社工作。你收到美国朋友Justin 的一封e-mail, 想了解在成都武侯祠旅游的一些信息,请你根据以下内容给他几点建议。
注意事项: 1。部分词汇 1)纪念 in honor of 2)蜀国 Shu Kingdom 3)丞相 Prime Mininster 4) 武侯祠 Wuhou Temple; 5) 位于 be located; 2。不要逐条翻译,可适当
发挥,使所写内容连贯。 3。所写内容必须包括表格中的全部信息。 4。字数:80-100个.
练习二:
你愿意帮助别人吗?寒假将至, 那是自愿者服务活动的好时机。请你写一篇关于自愿者活动
的文章。要求如下:
1. 你愿意参加哪些项目?根据下图内容以及你的兴趣和爱好,选择
两项你要参加的项目来写。
2.在这些活动中你能做些什么?你将怎样做?
3.你为何要参加这些项目?你认为有什么意义?谈谈你的想法。
4.题目自拟,字数80词左右。
5. 参考词汇:volunteer, I’d like to„I can„, I will„, If I„ I could/would„.
commitment„
书面表达的要点是:
1. 能否根据提示、要求运用所学词组、句型
写出易懂的短文;
2. 短文结构是否有层次、有条理,能否清楚
表达自己的意思;
3. 是否能较为准确地运用语法、词汇,拼写、
标点基本正确;
4. 能否使用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全
文内容连贯。
One possible version:
Dear Justin,
Wuhou Temple is located in the southern part of Chengdu. It’s a famous place of interest both in Chengdu and in China. It was built in honor of Zhuge Liang, the Prime Minister of Shu Kingdom in ancient China.
Wuhou Temple is also a wonderful museum. It’s a good place for people who are interested in the history of ancient China.
It’s convenient to go there by bus or taxi. There’re some bus lines to take you right there. The ticket price of the Temple: for adults, 60 RMB; for students, half price; for kids under 1.2m and people over 70 years old, pay free.
Welcome to Chengdu!
Yours,
HanMei
One possible version:
Being Volunteer is Great!
My friend Xiao Ming and I both want to be volunteers. For me, I’d like to visit the old people’s house. There’re many things to do, we can sing songs and dance to make them happy. And we can also help them do some washing and cleaning.
Xiao Ming wants to join the After-class Care Center. She said: “ I hope I can help the kids with their lessons. I’ll encourage them to try their best to get good grades.”
I think if my dream came true, I’d be very happy!