开放性英语作文写法讲义及练习
开放性英语作文的写作方法
“开放作文”的命题方式是让考生根据一幅图画,在描述图画信息之余,发挥自己的想象,展开简单的议论。北京市的“开放作文”和全国硕士研究生入学考试的英语作文有点像。现在,北京市“开放作文”倾向于“就图论事”。 开放作文试题的要求一般都会这样描述:
1) 文章扣题:描述有的放矢,突出主题。
2) 思维活跃:发散思维空间,学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3) 内容健康充实:内容要点乐观向上,以积极的态度进行表达。
一、写作步骤
仔细审图片内容,即图片中的物象包括些什么,及其他们各自的特点。这是为整篇作文立意的前提。发挥创新思维和发散思维能力,尝试多角度立意(如从人生哲理,学习态度,社会意义等方面立论) 。确定论点,并组织论证过程。在论证过程中,常用的论述方法是正反论述,对比论述,联系实际举例论述。句与句之间连接成分的恰当使用,可使议论部分脉络更加清晰,语言逻辑关系更加流畅。所以,从结构上讲,开放作文有明显的套路可循。其实“开放作文”只要求做两件事,一件是描图(describe the picture) ,另一件是阐述你对图画的看法(explain how you understand it ),但是,在“描述”和“阐述”之间加一个适当的“过渡”。总之,开放作文应分成三段:描图----析图---总结“组句成篇,
二. 开放作文有很多可供参考的“万能句子”:
描图部分:
As the picture vividly conveys,
As can be seen from the picture/as you can see in the picture,
What an interesting/funny picture!
析图部分:
In my opinion, figure refers to /stand for/represent...
As far as I'm concerned,
It's reasonable to relate...to...
There are people/things just like ones in the picture.
This picture reflects a common social phenomenon that...
This picture represents common people in our life.
This picture conveys the message that...
What the picture wants to tell us is that...
This picture tells us an important thing in our life...
The picture indicates that...
表达个人观点的高级句型。
1. In my opinion, we should believe him this time.
依我看,这次我们应该相信他。【信任是非常重要的!】
2. In my view, he will surely forgive you if you apologize.
我觉得,如果你道歉的话,他肯定会原谅你的。【要敢于承认错误!】
3. I suppose (that) the book will be helpful to you.
我觉得这本书对你会有帮助。
4. I maintain that nothing can take the place of hard work.
我认为,没有什么能够取代努力。【take the place of:代替;取代】
5. As far as I’m concerned, everyone should be given an equal opportunity.
在我看来,每个人都应该有公平的机会。【机会面前人人平等!】
6. As I see it, this is of great importance.
依我看来,这非常重要。
7. From where I stand, what he just said was somewhat reasonable. 从我的立场来看,他刚才说的话有些道理。
8. It seems to me that he doesn’t know what he is doing. 我觉得他好像不知道自己在干什么。
9. From my point of view, health is the most valuable wealth. 在我看来,健康是最宝贵的财富。【好身体是一切的基础!】
10. It’s my feeling that attitude is more important than ability. 我觉得态度比能力更重要。
第二节 开放作文(15分)
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
Y ou are your Australian friend Jim are visiting a city where you see the street sculptures as shown below. You and Jim are discussing what the artist is trying to say. Now you are telling Jim how you understand this piece of art and what makes you think so.
提示词:雕塑 sculpture
笔记本电脑 laptop
某城市街头雕塑
第一.审题——审内容,审文体,审时态,审人称,审字数要求等。(5审)
第二.描图——抓要点
第三.析图——阐述你对图画的看法
第四.总结-——谋篇布局
第五.检查誊写
第二节 开放作文(满分15分)
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
Xiao Ming tells you that he had 100 yuan yesterday morning, which he put into the pocket of his jacket. He spent 40 yuan yesterday afternoon. But now when he reaches into the pocket of his jacket, he finds only 10 yuan.
He is wondering what has happened to the rest of the money. As his friend, you suggest to him three or four different possibilities concerning the missing money.
第一.审题——审内容,审文体,审时态,审人称,审字数要求等。(5审)
第二.描图——抓要点
第三.析图——阐述你对图画的看法
第四.总结-——谋篇布局
第五.检查誊写
开放作文(15分)
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50.
In your English class,you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your
classmantes how you understand it.
第一.审题——审内容,审文体,审时态,审人称,审字数要求等。(5审)
第二.描图——抓要点
第三.析图——阐述你对图画的看法
第四.总结-——谋篇布局
第五.检查誊写