中考英语作文辅导材料及范文模板
英语写作材料
培养英语思维---词的搭配
大雨heavy rain 大桥long bridge 大楼high rise/large building 大错big/terrible/serious mistake 大病serious illness 大地震major earthquake 句子的表达-注意英汉差别
一、状语
e.g. 她一周有三个下午在一家百货公司做兼职。
在我十岁那年我和家人经历了一次奇妙的旅行。
二、谓语动词
汉语:无动词或多动词
英语:单动词
e.g. 我妈妈很漂亮。 My mother is pretty.
我们又唱又跳。 We sang and danced.
我们邀请他们到上海来玩。We invited them to come to Shanghai for a visit.
你上课常常缺席所以我想要提醒你。You are often absent from class so I want to remind you.
三、主语
活到老,学到老。One is never too old to learn.
很难说谁对谁错。It’s hard to tell who is right and who is wrong.
昨天找到了丢失的钢笔。The lost pen was found yesterday.
上饭店吃饭很贵。It’s expensive to eat out.
乘飞机旅行更舒适、便捷。Traveling by plane is faster and more convenient.
四、定语 汉:常常是前臵定语;英:前臵和后臵定语
我们学校的所有学生all the students in our school
左边数第五个男孩the fifth boy from the left
英国人的日常生活everyday lives of the British
在中国骑车的人数the number of cyclists in China
几种气体的混合物a mixture of several gases
三到六岁的孩子Children from 3 to 6 years of age
隔壁的音像店the music store next door
用英语写的信the letter(s) in English
晚上最晚一班返回的公交车the last bus back in the evening
城市生活的嘈杂、脏乱the noise and dirt of city life
当一个音乐家的计划plans to be a musician
出国学习的机会the chance to study abroad
供人坐着休息的安静场所a quiet place for people to sit in/rest
找到任何一个可以询问的人find anyone to ask
Writing tips:
1.时态一致
必须注意所用时态符合上下文。如果用过去时叙述一个故事,就要保证通篇都用过去时,不要在作文中间变成现在时。同样,如果是在谈论普遍问题、现状或日常习惯,就要用现在时,而不要用过去时。
e.g. Yesterday I did my homework. It takes me three hours.
His father thought he is good at math.
She started her new job last week. She liked it.
We didn’t go to the party. We aren’t invited.
2. 主语一致
应该保持全文人称一致,这样读者才能跟随一个逻辑思维顺序。否则读者会感到困惑。
e.g. Although you may fail the exam, he can still be useful to the country.
It not only provides you with lots of knowledge but also develops his interests.
3. 主谓一致/人称一致, 确保语法正确。
e.g. Things I hate to do is doing homework.
Every people start to learn English.
Every person starts to learn English.
The activities can relax ourselves.
The activities can help us relax ourselves./We can relax ourselves by taking part in the activities.
4. 词序/语序。它能够帮助准确表达作者本意并并避免意义含糊不清。注意要让句子尽量保持英语的表达习惯。 e.g. I already have had lunch.
She with her mum traveled to Italy.
I always be the winner of the piano contest.
In China, he knew there were big floods.
5. 并列句。用并列句能使文章更生动流畅,它包含两个独立分句和一个连词,如:and, but, or, so等。
e.g It was crowded. We were able to see him.
She is a top student. She is a talented musician.
Though he doesn’t have much money, but his heart is full of love.
文章的结构 --开头、主体和结尾
中考英语书面表达篇幅要求不长,但是,要求有明确的开头部分,文章主体部分及结尾部分,不能是一篇由十几个句子简单拼凑起来的短文。因此,在写作过程中,要注意以下要点:
1. “开门见山”式的开头:一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单 明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
2. “条理清楚”的主体:理顺要点的先后表达顺序,并将各个单句按照其逻辑关系进行适当调整。
3. “点明主题”的自然结尾:文章的结尾没有固定的模式,可以根据表达主题的需要灵 活创造。一种较为常见的结尾方法,是对一篇文章的中心思想、主要内容进行清晰明朗的总结,甚至是画龙点睛。恰当的总结和归纳往往会使文章增色。
十句作文法
所谓十句作文并非一定是10句,很多考生的高分作文(80字以下)的句子数量都在8-10句之间(以句子长短和不同结构而变化)。其基本模式为:
第一段(开头): 主题句(第一句)
扩展句(第二句)
第二段(正文)----扩展句(第3-7句)视内容而决定扩展句的多少
第三段(结尾)----结尾句(第八句)
第一段为开头,包括两句。第一句为主题句,提出问题并通过问题点明全文主体;第二句为扩展句,进一步说明和支持主题句。第二段为正文,共七句左右。第一句为主题句提出本段的主旨,其余为扩展句。句与句之间应用好过渡词。第三段为结尾,简化为一句,是对全文的总结,并说明自己的观点。
Time order:
First, …/First of all,… Next,…
Second,… After that,…
Third,… Then…
Space order
On the right,…On the left,…In the center,…In the middle,… Finally,…
Next to the…,…Beside the…,…Opposite the ______,…
Near the ______,…Under the ______,…Above the ______,…
On one side of the ______,…On the other side of the ______,…
Transition signals
1、递进:besides, in addition, what’s more
2、转折和对比:but, however, on the other hand,
3、总结:in short, in brief, for these reasons
4、因果和结论:as a result, due to, because of, thus, therefore
5、强调:really, indeed, surely
6、其它插入语:worse still/what’s worse, after all, if possible,
Sayings and proverbs:谚语
Pride goes before a fall 骄者必败 .
A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。
Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。
Custom makes all things easy.有个好习惯,事事皆不难。
Great hopes make great man.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。
Honesty is the best policy.做人诚信为本。
Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.抱最好的愿望,做最坏的打算。
Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.世上无难事,只要肯登攀。
If a thing is worth doing, it’s worth doing well. 值得做的是就值得做好。
Where there is life, there is hope. 生活充满了希望。/留得青山在,不怕没柴烧
A close mouth catches no flies.病从口入。
An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果,不用请医生。
Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起身体好。
A mother's love never changes. 母爱永恒。
A friend is easier lost than found.得朋友难,失朋友易。
A friend is never known till a man has need. 需要之时方知友。
A good book is the best of friends, the same today and forever.一本好书,相伴一生。
By reading we enrich the mind, by conversation we polish it.读书使人充实,交谈使人精明。
Choose an author as you choose a friend.择书如择友。
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只会用功不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。
We know not what is good until we have lost it.好东西,失去了才明白。
Variety is the spice of life.丰富多彩是生活的调味品。
Life is just like a bowl of cherries.生活犹如一盘樱桃。
Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass. 生活没有目标等于航行没有指南针。
Pleasant hours fly past.快乐时光去如飞。
万能模板
一.书信类
开头:How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
结尾: With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier
二、口头通知常见写作模板
呼语及开场白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please?
I have an announcement to make.
正文部分:
ll the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don’t be late.
结束语部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you’ll have a nice time here.
That’s all. Thank you.
三、议论文模板 正反观点式议论文模板
导入:第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should.。. (导入话题)
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)
正文: 第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点) Here are the reasons. First.。. Second.。. Finally.。.(列出2~3个赞成的理由)
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)
Their reasons are as follows.
In the first place..
What’s more.
In addition..(列出2~3个反对的理由)
结论: 第4段:Personally speaking/In my opinion ,/ To my mind ,/ As far as I am concerned ,/ I am of the opinion that …, the advantages overweight the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点)
4.“How to”类议论文模板:
导入: 第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文: 第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all.。. Another way to solve the problem is 。.. Finally.。.(列出2~3个 解决此类问题的办法)
结论: 第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to.。.(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)
中考英语作文各类话题优秀作文构写思路与评讲
学校生活篇:
1. 上学期间,学校的某些场所一定给你留下了美好的记忆,如教室、阅览室、操场等。某英文报纸正以”My favorite place at School”为题征文,请你投稿。描述一个你最喜欢的地方,并请说明原因。提示词语:Classroom, reading-room, playground, bright, quiet, large, help, improve.
My favorite place at school
My favorite place at school is the reading room. It is very big and bright. There are a lot of useful books, newspapers and magazines there.
I like reading books and magazines there because they not only provide me with much knowledge, but also help me learn a lot about what is happening around the world. Sometimes I even feel I can have a talk with the people in the books.
I can also relax myself in the peaceful environment there. When I feel tired and unhappy, the reading room is the best place to go to. Reading helps me forget all my troubles.
For me, the reading room is the place I like best.
2. 你觉得你的校园生活安全吗?请你写一篇题为”How to Keep safe in school”的短文,谈谈你的看法。
内容包括:
1.描述一件发生在你身上或你看到的发生在校园的意外事件(经过与结果)
2.提出解决这种校园意外事件的建议(至少两条)
3. 呼吁每个学生要注意校园安全。
How to Keep safe in school
Do you know our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough. For example,Last month,my friend Tom fight with a classmate. And Tom chase the classmate. By the time he run into the classmate , the classmate had already closed the door, so Tom hit the door, and then he send to the hospital soon, and he stay in hospital about two weeks.
So, we should know the important of the safe in school. Here are my suggestions. We can't fight with others. And we should get on well with our classmates. What's more, we should be carefully in our school life. Let's keep safe in school, and have a better life!
3. 中招考试即将到来,许多学生感到压力很大,为此很烦恼。你校的校刊特意进行了课后放松方式的调查。请你以”Learn to relax yourself “为题写一篇80词左右的短文。要点提示:
1)学生压力大及其表现
2)学会放松很重要
3)常见的放松方式
4)最适合的自我放松方式
5)我的建议
Learn to relax yourself
Now many students of Grade 9 are under too much pressure. They always feel too tired to listen to the teachers carefully in class.
It’s important for students to relax. Only in this way can they study well and be healthy. Here are some different ways to relax themselves. For example, they can try to have enough sleep,or they can listen to their favorite music after class. They can also read some books or do some sports. For me, I often hang out with my friends.
While you are studying, don’t forget to relax. You will study better after a good rest.
4. Maggie 在英语学习中遇到一些困难,她写信向你求教并邀请你周末去她家。请你写回信应邀并向她介绍英语学习的方法(不少于两条),建议她用英语回信以提高英语表达能力。词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数。
I’d love to visit you this weekend. I’m sorry that you have some trouble learning English. Let me give you some advice. Do you take notes in English class? It’s a good way to learn English grammar. And if you are poor in listening, you can watch English movies and listen to English songs. Why not write back in English? It will help you to improve your writing. I hope you will make great progress in your study of English.
5. 请以”My middled school life is______________”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1.先把题目补充完整(空格处可以是单词、短语,也可以是从句);
2.短文内容应包括三方面的信息:in the past, now 和in the future.
3.短文中不得出现真实的地名或人名及能够透露出你个人身份的信息。
4.词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My middle school life is unforgettable
In the past, I was busy learning my subjects and worked hard at them, I got on well with my classmates, I was good at English and I liked playing basketball. Now I am interested in history because it is
very interesting. I have many interests such as reading books, playing sports and so on. In this way my life has become richer and I gained more knowledge.
In the future, I’ll try my best to do better. I’ll aim to enjoy my school life and make it more and more beautiful if we learn to say”thanks” to others. Don’t forget to say “thanks”!
6. 初中阶段的学校生活即将结束,在离校之前, 同学们讨论怎么样做一件有意义的事。请根据表中信息写一篇英语短文,为某英语报举办的征文比赛投稿。
有的同学建议:给学校买礼物,感谢母校老师
另外一些同学建议:用零花钱给灾区和贫困地区的学生买学习用品
你的建议及感想......
We’ll leave school soon. Now my classmates are discussing how to do a meaningful thing before leaving school. Some students think we should buy a proper gift for our school and thank the teachers for helping and taking care of us. Others think we should buy pencils,pens, notebooks,schoolbags and some other school things for the children in the disaster areas and poor areas.
In my opinion, we should thank those who help us. We should help those in need and do a bit for our society.
展望未来篇:
1. 下个学期,我们每一位同学即将进入新的学校。请你根据下列提示,以”New School, New Life”为题,用英文写一篇80词左右的短文,谈一谈你的新学校、新生活、新打算。
1. What kind of new friends and teachers would you like to have?
2. Why do you want to have this kind of new friends and teachers?
3. What do you think your new school life will be like?
4. How will you improve yourself in the future?
New School,New Life
I’m a student in a middle school and will graduate in very soon. I hope to study in a beautiful high school. I want to have lots of good friends. My new teachers will be very friendly to me and I can learn a lot from them. In the new school, we will have enough time to do after-school activities.
The life will be very colorful. If I have some problems in the new school, I can go to a “buddy club” for help. In the future, I will do my best to improve myself. I believe I will be better and better.
节约能源篇:
1. 节约能源是每个公民的责任和义务,那么作为中学生,我们该如如何节能呢?请你根据下列要点提示用英语写一篇短文。
提示:1.步行或骑自行车去上学;最好不坐公交车或私家车;
2. 使用节能灯,少开灯,离开时记住关灯。
3. 节约用水,注意随手关好水龙头 4. 节约用纸,随身携带手帕。
5. 要有回收利用废品的意识。
提示词:private car 私家车 energy-saving light 节能灯 handkerchief 手帕
要求:1. 要包括以上所有要点,要做到行文流畅、脉络清晰
2. 词数为80-100.
It’s our duty to save energy. As middle school students, what should we do to save energy?
Firstly, we can walk or ride a bike to school. We’d better not take the bus or the private car. Secondly, we should use energy--saving lights when you leave the room. Thirdly, we should save water. Don’t forget to turn off the water tap after using it. Fourthly, we also need to save paper. It’s a good idea to bring a handkerchief with us. Fifthly, we should learn to recycle waste things such as cans, paper and bottles. In a word, we should try our best to save energy.
2. 地球是我们的家园。作为地球的主人,我们应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导”低碳”生活,作为中学生,我们应该怎么样做呢? 谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几点:
1)节约用水、用电; 2)节约纸张,循环使用课本,保护森林;
3)节约粮食,在更多的土地上种树 4)不乱丢杂物,保护环境
How does our earth turn better?
The earth is our home. As the owner, we should protect our earth. But how to live in the low-carbon
lifestyle?
I think as middle school students, we should save the resources around us, such as the water,the electricity and so on. I think saving paper is necessary. All the used textbooks should be recycled. Thus, fewer trees will be cut down. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farms. Don’t throw litter everywhere. It will pollute our environment.
If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the life we are living will be better and better.
亲情篇:
1. 母爱是每个人的至爱,母亲为我们付出了许多。对我们每个人来说,母爱恩重如山,情深似海。 请以”I love my mother”为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,以表示对母亲的感恩之情。
There are many people around me,but I love my mother best.
My mother is a teacher and she is also a great mother. She tries to do what he can to help me with my study and my life. She takes good take of me. Without her help, I can’t grow healthy.
She is very busy, but every morning, she gets up early to make breakfast. One midnight, I had a fever. She was very worried and took me to the hospital at once. Two days later, I was well but she fell ill. I was truly sorry for that.
I’ll do my best to be a good child of my mother. I’’ love her forever.
2. 今天是父亲节。 假定你是李华,请给你的美国笔友John 写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下:
1)表述你与父亲间的情感;
2)为父亲制作一张卡片;
3)帮助父亲做点事
4)陪父亲散步等
注意:词数80-100
Dear John,
It’s Father’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it?
I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me.
Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it.Then I will help him wash his shirts afternoon and cook his favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. I’m sure he’ll be happy.
What’s your plan for Father’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
生活运动篇:
近年,由教育部、国家体育总局、共青团中央联合发起了:“全国亿万青少年学生阳光体育运动。”你在学校参加了此项活动,请你配合此项活动以”Let’s do sports”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,要求包括以下要点:
1)运动带给你的益处; 2)最喜欢的体育项目及原因; 3)号召大家一起来运动,强身健体
I think doing sports is necessary. Sports can help us relax and concentrate on our studies better. Sport can make us grow well. Sports can bring us friends.
Which sports do you like best? Running is my favorite. At first, I went running to keep my body fit. Now, I find it fun and free. You can run anytime you feel like it. All you need is a pair of running shoes. You can see all kinds of scenes while running and stop at those that attract you to appreciate them.
Haven’t you got a favorite sport? Stop hesitating! Come and run with us!
练习:
一.健康是一个重要话题,健康的身心,能使我们和谐相处,愉快的学习。为此,学校英语广播站举行“健康成长”征文比赛活动。请你根据要求写一篇80词以上的短文。
内容要求:1. 健康重要。
2. 如何做到身心健康(饮食、起居、运动、沟通)。
参考词汇:health, keep healthy, keep a balanced diet, communicate, exercise, relax, junk food, enough sleep
二.回想三年的英语学习历程,丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下 了许多难忘的印象。请你以“What should we do in English class?”为题 写一篇英语短文,谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做,才能使英语学习 更有效。
提示:(1) Listen to the teacher.
(2) Take part in activities.
(3) Be confident in ourselves.
要求:(1) 文稿须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2) 文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
(3) 词数:60~80 个。
参考词汇:take notes, work in groups with…, not be afraid of…
三.网络正逐渐走进我们的生活,而其利弊也都不同程度地显现了出来。请以Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet 为题,写一篇80字左右的短文。
提示:可以从read news, e-mail, chat, study, play games, see the
pictures or films even the unhealthy ones等方面加以评论。
要求:1. 要有表明自己观点的句子。
2. 书写工整,句式规范,条理清楚,标点符号使用正确。
3. 短文中应包括提示内容,可适当发挥,但不能出现真实的人名、地名。