一线英语教师教你写作文:八年级上册第七单元(未来生活)
一,话题分析
本单元话题为“未来生活(Lile in the fture)'。针对生活进行预测,设想与展望,同时也涉及将过去、现在与未来的生活进行对比。涵盖的方面比较广,如居住环境,科技发展。环境保护等。在写作的过程中要求能够恰当地运用各种时态对过去、现在与将来的生活进行描述,运用比较级等表述不同阶段的特征等。
二,句式演练
1.我想我会当一名医生.因为我喜欢帮助别人。
I think I will be a doctor. because I like helping others.
2.我会搬到乡下去居住。那里的人更需要帮助,因为那里的医生更少。
I will move to the countryside. People there need more help because there are fewer doctors.
3.空闲的时候我会养鸡或者骑马去山里面露营。
I will feed chickens or ride a horse to camp in the mountain in my free time.
4.乡下的水和空气会更加干净,树木也会更多。
The water and air in the countyside will be cleaner. and there will be more trees.
三,范例剖析
李明和他的同学正在谈论他们未来的打算。李明擅长写文章,并且非常喜欢旅游,他的打算是中学毕业后上一所重点大学,大学毕业后当一名记者。请根据以上信息对李明工作的情况做一些恰当地预测,写一篇80 词左右的短文。文章开头已经给出,不计人总词数。
四,思路点拔
根据题目的要求,需要描述清楚李明的兴趣、特长及其职业打算的关系;围绕工作,可以从工作的地点、内容及特点等方面展开。在写作时,需要注意一般现在时态、一般将来时态及一般过去时态的正确使用。语法检查名词单复数的变化、形副用法辨析、谓语动词的时态、代词的运用、标点、大小写等。行文连贯流畅自然。
五,小试牛刀
Li Ming and his classmates are talking about what they are going to be when they grow up. LiMing says he wants to study in a key university atter he finishes middle school. He is good a writing articles and likes traveling very much, so he is going to be a reporter after he graduates from the university. He says if he becomes a reporter. he will travel everywhere to cover the news. During the trip.he expects to meet interesting people.He is going to keep a diary of his travel and wite a book about it.He says he has made a decision to study hard and he believes his dream can come true.