22份高考英语短文改错解题技巧
一.错误形式与改法
1 改词(6—7个):在文中该词下面划横线
2 添词(1—2个):在文中标上添词符号(∧);在题号后横线上写出要添的词。
3 去掉(1—2个):在文中用斜线( \ )划掉该词;在题号后写上要划掉的词,并也用斜线划掉。
二.高考内容
(1)词法内容。包括名词、代词的数与格,反身代词,动词时态语态,非谓语动词、短语动词的用法,不规则动词的变化形式,形容词的比较级,形容词副词的区别,介词的误用等。
(2)句法内容。包括主谓一致、指代一致,并列连词,从属连词等引导各种从句的关联词语,感叹句,疑问句,祈使句的结构等。
(3)行文逻辑。包括句子的肯定、否定、推理判断等。
考点设置之名词:单复数用反
1.She said that she and my schoolmate all wished mesuccess.(schoolmate改为schoolmates)
2. After class we become stranger at once.(stranger改为strangers)
3. They want me to devote all my time to my studies sothat I’ll get marks in all my subject.(subject改为subjects)
4. On the way up I was busy taking picture since thescenery was so beautiful.(picture改为pictures)
5. There are advantage for students to work whilestudying at school.(advantage改为advantages)
6. He had no ideas that the kitchen was not forguests.(ideas改为idea)
7. ) I looked at his other hands. (hands改为hand)
考点设置之代词
1.人称代词的偷换错误 2. 缺少人称代词的错误
3. 人称代词数的一致问题 4. 人称代词格的一致问题
The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.(his改为their)
I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei.( who’s改为whose)
It was about noon when we arrived at the foot of themountain. The three of them were very excited.(them改为us) Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself on paper as Iwas learning to express me in simple English .(me改为myself)
One day I wrote a little story and showed to myteacher .(showed后加it)
Some students may also save up for our college orfuture use .(our改为their)
I took it in me and we walked. (me改为mine)
考点设置之介词
介词短语常常考,固定搭配要记牢。介词后边跟宾语,结合语境细推敲。
We do not seem to get much time to talk abouttogether.(去掉about)
I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment myhead touched the pillow. (去掉at)
The main problem was in that I always thought inChinese and tried to translate anything into English.(去掉was后的in)
We’ll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner.(with改为about)
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. (with改为for)
He was looking for a glass the cupboard. (glass后加in)
Each these lines stands for a trouble in my life. (each后加of)
考点设置之时态
命题特点及改正方法:现在时与过去时的误用,句中一般没有时间状语。每年都考。要注意联系上下文,着眼于整个语篇的时态。通常整篇都是过去,突然一个句子用现在时。其中又以一般现在时和过去时互改为多。
详解:
They did not want me to do any work at home; they wantme to devote all my time to my studies so that---(did改为do)
The time passes quickly. Evening came.(passes改为passed)
She liked it very much and reads it to the class.(reads改为read)
I don’t know that they don’t like to talk with me.Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class.(talked改为talk)
I will write again and send you the photos we taketogether.(take改为took)
We had guests last night who have not stayed in aB&B hotel ago.(have改为had)
考点设置之and\but\or误用及前后不一致
命题特点:主要考查and、or、but、so等并列连词的误用。
She is smiling at me but nodding at me.(but改为and)
It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and aguest.(and改为or)
The food was expensive and the service was good.(and改为but)
I came into the living room and saw one of them justgo through the kitchen door but turn on the light.(but改为and)
We fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.(visiting改为visited)
She liked it very much and reads it to the class.(reads改为read)
考点设置之从句连词
It was about noon we arrived at the foot of themountain.(noon后加when)
I don’t know that they don’t like to talk with me.(that改为why)
The main problem was in that I always thought inChinese and tried to translate everything into English.(去掉that前的in)
What things are in other homes, I wonder.(What改为How)
Earning their own money allows them to spend onanything as if they please.(去掉if)
They did not want breakfast because that they weregoing out early in the morning.(去掉that)
考点设置之冠词
1)不定冠词a和an互改;2)不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改;3)根据需要增删冠词。
As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kindsof plants and animals. (famous前加a)
We may be one family and live under a same roof, but---(a改为the)
On Thursday I will have to decide what I want to doover a weekend.(a改为the)
I hope you’ve had pleasant journey home (had后加a)
考点设置之形容词和副词
主要考查形容词和副词的误用、形容词及副词的比较级等。1)根据adj.或adv.的基本用法确定错误;2)修饰连系动词或名词用形容词;3)修饰行为动词、形容词、过去分词及整个句子用副词。
I would describe myself as shy and quietly.(quietly改为quiet)
There have been reports in America about people tryingto steal person information for bad purposes.(person改为personal)
Finding information on the Net is easily.(easily改为easy)
So what I learned from the job was much more importantas what I earned.(as改为than)
My pronunciation was terribly .(terribly改为terrible)
They came back lately and had some tea.(lately改为late)
考点设置之非谓语动词
1)谓语动词和非谓语动词的错用;2)动词不定式和动名词的错用;3)现在分词和过去分词的错用等。 详解:
Earning their own money allow them to spend onanything as they please.(allow改为allows)
My parents will do all they can make sure that I get agood education.(make前加to)
Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I waslearning to express myself in simple English.(talk改为talking)
We fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.(visiting改为visited)
Some students may also to save up for our college orfuture use.(去掉to)
短文改错口诀
动词形,名词数,还要注意形和副;非谓语,细辨别,习惯用法要记住;
句子成分多分析,逻辑错误须关注;冠词连词常光顾
一、动词形:主要包括两类错误:动词的时态和语态错误,以及主、谓不一致的错误。动词形常见错误:
1) 一般过去时与一般 现在时错用。
2)第三人称单数形式错用。
2) and 前后动词时态不一致。(and具有对称性)
4) 主谓不一致。
5) 缺少谓语动词(尤其缺be动词)
6) 主动语态与被动语态错用
7)Used to 的运用错误
二、名词数:指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。改正方法:
1)根据名词前的修饰限定成份.2)根据上下文的逻辑关系.
三、还要注意形和副:注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。命题特点及改正方法:主要考查形容词和副词的误用、形容词及副词的比较级等。根据adj或adv的基本用法确定错误;修饰连系动词或名词用形容词;修饰行为动词、形容词、过去分词及整个句子用副词。
四、非谓语,细辨别:这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词,动名词和不定式错误。
1)不定式2)动名词作主语、宾语3)and 连接的不定式或动名词前后一致(尤其距离较远时) 4)现在分词和过去分词的区别等。
五、习惯用法要记住:主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识,其错误表现形式主要有三种:多词、少词和搭配错误。
六、句子成分多分析:不同的句子成分要用不同的词类;不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析,才能找出用词不当的错误。
七、逻辑错误须关注:与句子的上、下文不一致,甚至相矛盾,属于逻辑性错误,如称谓上的张冠李戴。
八、冠词连词常光顾:常考的错误形式有:连词but, and, or和so的用法错误,以及冠词的用法错误等。
改错训练题
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号^,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改:在错词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
01(浙江省重点中学2013届高三上学期期中联谊)
Manager,
I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.
First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety hazards. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.
As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make more improvements. Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
02(浙江省湖州三县2013届高三上学期期中联考)
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!
03(浙江省宁波市金兰合作组织2013届高三上学期期中联考) Years of school life has taught me a lot of thing, of which teamwork is the most important for me. In fact, I didn't realize its importance until I was chosen the monitor of my class in my senior
middle school. At first, I did most of the duties myself when other students cared little about class activities. As result, I was tired out and depressing. Then I turned to his teacher and he advised me to cooperate to others. Thus I began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and had everyone do their part in class.
It is working in teams instead of on my own who has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficiently.
04(浙江省温州十校联合体2013届高三期中考试)
The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and I thought
about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In the other hand, I can make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow.
05(山东省聊城市堂邑中学2013届高三11月月考) I just come back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the student from
different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28. We paid a visit to many places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.
06(海南省琼海市嘉积中学2013届高三上学期高中教学质量监测) Dear Jim,
I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6, which was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-metre race. He finish the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. We can’t speak too high of him. To my great joy, my class was rewarded first prize. The sports meet was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.
Looking forward to receiving your letter.
Yours,
Li Ping
07(辽宁省五校协作体2013届高三上学期期中)
As a teenager, I remember Dad get home lately every night. He already had a great work and loved by his students. He took years to finish
that he wanted. And now, decades later, I see myself for him. I go to work
throughout the week and then came the weekend. I go to class for six hours
on Sunday so I can finish my degree that I started twenty years ago. It took
me the long time to figure out that what I wanted. I want to do for student
what my father did for students. In my opinion, my father is my real hero.
08(辽宁省沈阳二中2013届高三上学期期中)
College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to
pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in
and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way
they can pay at least part of the fees. As for me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because
they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school
students maths, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of
course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.
09(河南省中原名校2013届高三上学期期中联考)
I went to a shop to buy a jacket one Sunday. It is famous one where there are a variety of clothes. I looked all around and finally find an attractive jacket. When I was asked the price, the assistant said,
10(河南省洛阳市2013届高三“一练”考试)
I am very much glad to receive a letter from you. You know, in China we call people born between 1990 and 1999 the post – 90s. I am a boy belong to this group. For our generation, life is getting more difficult than for the old generation. The job market is tough. The house is too expensive to afford. Now many girls would like marry a man who own a house and a car. I don’t think love built on houses and cars was true love. And this is the social reality that they have to face. Because situations are tough today, we post – 90s are making great effort to live a good life. We think we will make life better and better in the future.
11(河南省长葛市第三实验高中2013届高三上学期第三次月考) In recent years many flowers shops have been appeared in our small town. It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering, visiting a sick friend, or attend a wedding or birthday party. I still remember clear one day last year when Tom, a disabled student, presented some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude for her. He owing his entire life to his mother’s kind and care. With her he would not have had the confidence or the courage to fight his disability. As a result the great effort he has made, he was finally admitted to a key university.
12(2012河北省名师俱乐部高三第二次调研考试)
Thanksgiving Day is one of the most important family holiday in America. All the
members of a family, no matter where far away they are, will try to get together in that day. The first Thanksgiving in America takes place in October 1621. In 1620,the group of
Englishmen sailed to Massachusetts .They were looking for a freely place to live in as they chose. So they experienced a hard winter. Half of them starved death. The next spring,they began farming. With the help of local Indians,they learned to be plant corn and raise animals. In the fall, the fields produced a good harvest,. Filling with joy and thanks to God,they held
A celebration. In 1863,it became a national holiday.
13(河北省保定市八校2013届高三12月联考)
Three years ago, I became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient but considerate.Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best use for it. I worked hardly and got along well my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties, they were always helpful. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated.
My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that
determines who you are.