建议信写作
建议信
a.文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有合理性和说服力。通常包括：
1. 说明写信目的。
2. 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。
3. 表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。
b.常用语块
1. 给某人提建议 ________________________
2. 如下 ________________________
3. 在做某事时遇到困难
__________________________
4. 利用 ________________________
5. 向某人征求意见________________________
give sb. some advice (on)
as follows
have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.
make use of
ask sb. for advice
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6. 制订计划 _______________________
7. 认为……有用
_______________________
8. 参加 _______________________
9. 听从某人的建议 _______________________
10. 把……考虑在内
_______________________
make a plan
find…helpful/useful/beneficial
take part in/participate in
follow one’s advice
take sth. into account/consideration
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11. 得到改善 ________________________
12. 有所好转 ________________________
13. 依我看来 ________________________
14. 我已收到你的来信，得知你……
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15. 我建议…… ________________________
get improved
change for the better
in my opinion/in my view/from
my point of view
I have received your letter saying that you…
I would like to suggest that…/I would like to make a recommendation that…/I am writing to advise you of…/If I were you, I would…/May I suggest that…/I would like to put forward the suggestion that…
● c.套用句式
● 建议信除了遵循书信的格式之外，还要求在信中针对别人的问题，给出你的观点及解
决办法。常见的写作模式为；
● 1 首段；表明写作意图，陈述事由。
● 常用句型有；
● It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on....
● I am writing to express my views concerning...
● You have asked for my advice on...and I will try to
● make some suggestions.
I`m writing to ask you to consider ...
I think it would do great good if you could ...
I would like you to consider the following suggestions.
I hope you will take my advice into account.
I hope you will take my suggestions seriously.
Thank you for reading my letter.
I`m looking forward to ...
2 .主体: 提出建议或改进措施,并阐明理由。常用句型有:
I would like to suggest/recommend that...
If I were you, I would...
It seems to me that you could...
In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.
I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should... I wonder if you have considered the following suggestion(s).
As to…..,I suggest that you should...
3. 结尾: 鼓励收信人接收建议。注意要有礼貌，使对方容易接受。
In the end, I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful. Thanks for reading my letter. I hope you will consider my suggestions. I believe you will take my advice into account /consideration.
I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful. Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help.
d.学以致用
1. 你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。
2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助的。
1. You have asked me for my advice with regard to… ,
and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
2. I feel that it would be beneficial if…
3. 我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助。
4. 我相信你会考虑我的建议的。
5. 如能看到……我会非常开心的。
3. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.
4. I trust you‘ll take my suggestion into account.
=I trust you’ll take good consideration of my suggestion.
5. I would be more than happy to see…
f.课外作业
假设你叫李华，得知你校要建设娱乐休闲中心，正在征求同学们的意见，请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建议信。
1. 娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室。
2. 最好在学生的课余时间开放。
3. 尽量不要收费。
4. ……
Dear Mr. President,
It`s come to my attention that our school is going to build a new leisure center. I`m writing to ask you to consider the following suggestions.
First, I`d like to suggest that there should be a table-tennis room as well as a badminton court. I think it would do great good if you could build the center with an eye to those students who are interested in playing table-tennis or badminton(理由一). Second, could the center open in our spare time? If so, we will have enough time to make full use of it(理由二).Third, we will be more than happy if the center is free. As we all know, not every student can afford the extra expense(理由三).
Thank you for reading my letter. I hope you will consider my suggestions. If the center is built, it will greatly enhance student life here on campus.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua