2014短文改错

一、短文改错 ( 本大题 共 7 题, 共计 75 分)

My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven.He wanted teach me about animals，insects and trees.My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting. One evening at sunset，we sat by the fire，have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky—they were looked like rain！We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

That day I didn't learn much about animals，insects or trees，but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

3、(10分)

Hello，boys and girls！Today，I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off.If you hear the alarm，stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and classmate.Don't panic or get out of line，and trying to remain quiet and calmly.Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire.If it's a false alarm and there is no fire，your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt，tell your teacher immediately.

4、(10分)

Dear Jeremy and Alice，

Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors，we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us．In a word，your dog—Cleo．

We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking．It is difficult to

understanding why she barks every minute she's outside．The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby．Beside，Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day．This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock．That is too much for us，considering how closely the houses are．

We appreciate our apologies and goodwill，but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter．

Sincerely，

Jack and Rose

5、(10分)

I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.

Before long，a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A

passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.

No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticketowner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers

their help.If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.

6、(10分)

My dream school starts at 8：30 a.m. and ends at 3：30 p.m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn't need to do so many homework.Therefore，we have more time with afterschool activities.For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.

My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

7、(10分)

Nearly five years before，and with the help by our father，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果） in our back garden．Since then — for all these year — we had been allowing tomatoes to selfseed where they please．As result，the plants are growing somewhere．The fruits are small in size，but juicy and taste．There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors．Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year，but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems．We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!