话题初中作文
Interpersonal Communication 人际沟通
【话题探究】
人际沟通是指人们之间的信息交流过程,也就是人们在共同活动中彼此交流各种观念、
思想和感情的过程。这种交流主要通过言语、表情、手势、体态以及社会距离等来表示。此
话题主要是家人、朋友、同学、师生、邻居、亲戚及其与他人之间的交往,社会礼仪及集体
活动等方面的内容。中考英语作文即是围绕这几方面来命题。
话题锦囊
常用词汇
friendly友好的 rude粗鲁的 polite有礼貌的 impolite没有礼貌的 good manners
有礼貌的(表现)bad manners没有礼貌的(表现) be strict with对某人要求严格 kind
和蔼的,善良的 say hello to向某人问候 care about 关心 give sb. a smile给某人微笑
friend 朋友 relative亲戚 classmate同班同学 teacher教师 customer 顾客 worker
工人 sister姐,妹 brother兄,弟 couple夫妇
常用句式
1. He is my best friend.他是我最好的朋友。
2. He is always helping others.他总是帮助别人。
3. He cares about his mother very much.他非常关心他的妈妈。
4. He often gives us a big smile.他经常对我们开心地微笑。
5. We should be students with good manners.我们应该成为有礼貌的学生。
6. We should say hello to our teachers.我们应该向我们的老师们问候。
经典语段
How to Make Friends
One of the most important things in the world is making friends. You can have no money, but
you cannot have no friends.
How can we make friends in the right way? At first, you must know the man who you want to
make friends with. If you find he often tells a lie, you' d better not make friends with him,
because maybe he will do the same thing to you. If you find he doesn't help others, you'd better
leave him, because maybe he will leave you when you are in great trouble. A good friend will be
happy when you win. He will be sad when you fail. If you have some questions in study, he will
be quite willing to teach you until you understand.
Do you have a good friend? If you don't, why don't you begin to look for him right now? If
you want to have this kind of friend, you must try your best to be a person like this. If you do that,
you will have many good friends.
如何交朋友
世上最重要的事情就是交朋友。你可以没有钱,但你不能没有朋友。
我们怎么用正确的方法交朋友呢?首先,你必须了解你想交朋友的人。假如你发现他经
常撒谎,你最好不要和他交朋友,因为可能他也会跟你撒谎。如果你发现他不帮助别人,你
最好离开他,因为你身处困境之中时可能他也会离开你。你获胜的时候好朋友会高兴。你失
败的时候他会悲伤。你学习中有困难的时候,他会很情愿地教给你直到你明白为止。
满分作文展示(2012年湖北恩施中考题)
父爱如山!假设父亲节即将来临,请你借此机会给你父亲写封信,和他谈谈心里话。
写作要点: 1.父亲辛勤工作,让我受到更好的教育,过上更好的生活;
2.父亲在学习上对我严格要求;考试失利时,他鼓励我不放弃;遇到困难时,父亲
鼓励我笑对生活;表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。
温馨提示:
1. 短文内容应包含所提示的要点,语言流畅,不要逐字翻译,可适当发挥;
2. 短文字数不少于80词,短文开头和结尾已替你写好,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear father,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Hua
写作指导
(1)内容分析
本文要求借父亲节即将来临的机会给你父亲写封信,和他谈谈心里话。题目已经给出两
大要点,因此写作过程中要紧扣这些要点,并要把内容适当发挥。本文应该主要用一般现在
时,适当使用现在完成时及一般过去时。行文主要用第一人称和第二人称。
(2)可能用到的词汇和句式
词汇:
work hard努力工作 so that目的是 receive a better education接受更好的教育 live a
better life过上更好的生活 be strict with对某人要求严格 help...with 帮助某人做某事
fail an exam考试不及格 encouraged sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 confident自信的 have
trouble in life在生活中遇到困难 brave勇敢的 not only ...but also...不但„„而且„„deep
love深深的爱. forever永远 Happy Father’s Day!父亲节快乐!
句型:
You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life.
You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework.
When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying.
When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at life.
You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life.
Thank you for your deep love.
I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!
Happy Father’s Day!
(3)注意事项
①使用各种不同的句式结构,来表达自己的思想;
②运用所有提示,并根据需要进行适当的发挥,写作要点如下:
1.父亲辛勤工作,让我受到更好的教育,过上更好的生活;
2.父亲在学习上对我严格要求;考试失利时,他鼓励我不放弃;遇到困难时,父亲鼓励我
笑对生活;表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。
③叙述中要注意各种时态的变化,主要用一般现在时,但也有用现在完成时态(如You
have given me so much)和一般过去时(如When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be
confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at
life.)的地方。
You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are
strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encour-
aged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be
brave and smile at life.
You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your
deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and
happy forever!
Happy Father’s Day!
点拨亮点
本篇习作紧密围绕所给汉语提示进行写作,表达了作者对父亲的深深的爱。全文语言地
道、简练,段落分明,句型多样,表达准确,使用了一些高级词汇和特殊的句型(时间状语
从句和祈使句),很好地完成了写作任务,是一篇很成功的作文范例。
①You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life.这一句
突出第一大要点:父亲辛勤工作,让我受到更好的教育,过上更好的生活。这一句运用了
so that引导的目的状语从句。本句子意义明确,表达准确,体现了作者扎实的语言基础和非
凡的表达能力;
②You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an
exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always
told me to be brave and smile at life.这几句突出第二大要点:父亲在学习上对我严格要求;考试
失利时,他鼓励我不放弃;遇到困难时,父亲鼓励我笑对生活。写出了父亲为儿女所做的事
情,体现了父亲的高尚品德,使得文章更具可读性,尤其是使用了When引导的时间状语从
句,使得句子表达更有特色;be strict with ,help ... with..., fail an exam , encourage me to be
confident ,keep trying. , have trouble in life, tell me to be brave and smile at life等短语和句型的
运用,提升了文章的档次;
③You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your
deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and
happy forever!这几个句子意在表达对父亲的感谢之情。作者的真情表达,使得文章生动有力;
④Happy Father’s Day!这一句成为一个段落,很好地表达了作者对父亲的节日祝福。文
字不多,但是意义深远。
话题写作训练
假如你叫李华,是阳光中学学生。你刚刚收到WORLDFRIENDSHIP ORGANIZATION
请以I’ll tell the good news to ____________为题,写一篇短文,与你的老师、亲人或朋
友分享这一喜讯。内容要点包括:
1. 当时的心情;
2. 告知师长、亲人或朋友的原因;
3. 临行前作哪些准备;
4. 回国后又哪些打算。
要求:1.补全标题;
2.字迹工整,语言规范,内容健康。词数80~100;
3.每个要点用1~2句话表达即可。
4. 鼓励写出真情实感,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不扣分;
5. 文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
I’ll tell the news to _________
As soon as I hear the news , I ___________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
I’ll tell the news to my best friend
As soon as I hear the news , I’m too excited to say a word. I want to share my happiness with
my best friend at once. I’m sure she must be happy for me.
In order to let the British know about China, I’ll take some pictures of our country to show
them. I’ll learn to do some simple Chinese cooking and maybe I’ll cook for my hosts.After all,
China is famous its food. I think I’ll have a good time there.
After coming back, I’ll tell her experience . And I’ll go on working hard to make our country
better and better.
某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep good relationship
with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇100词左右的英语短文参加此次活动:
1.父母规矩太多、过于强调学习成绩、不理解自己等问题;
2. 你对这些问题的看法;
3. 你与父母保待良好关系的做法。
How to keep good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have two many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with
my friends at nights. They don't allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too
much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don't quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don't allow me to make my own
decisions and give me too much pressure I know that it is because they really love me and want
me to have a bright future.
In order to keep good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them
as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.
(三)
英语课堂上,老师要求学生就“与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论。请根据以下你所在小
注意:1.词数80—100;
2.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。
How to get on well with others
How to get on well with others
As we know, students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways? First of
all, we should respect others. Everybody has their own way to do things, so we should
understand-each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share
our happiness and sadness. What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.
In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in these ways can we get along well.