高三英语作文讲评
高三书面表达讲评教案
步骤一：全面评价作文情况
步骤二：分析典型错误
1. 形式上错误：拼写错误，语法错误
2. 语意上错误：表意不清，表意不当，逻辑不合理，语境不足
3. 语用上错误：不合时宜，中式英语
4. 风格上错误：过于口语化，句型风格不一致
步骤三：小组讨论修改错误
步骤四：动态呈现好作文产生的过程
有部分同学在作文中很少出现单词、语法、句型等方面的错误，文章比较流畅，表达也比较到位，但是作文中缺乏让人眼前一亮的高级词汇以及表意清晰的复杂结果，而这些问题就是阻碍他们拿到高分的主要原因。例如：
1. 恰当地使用副词能使聚在变得更加精炼
2. 恰当地使用非谓语动词结构会丰富句子结构，使表达生动
步骤五：展示和评析范文
步骤六：学生独立修改作文
作文范文：
Dear Jack:
I know you are very much interested in my hometown Harbin and want to come and stay for some time. You also told me that you intended to do some language teaching during your stay here so that you can be more familiar with the local people and their life. Recently I read a job advertised in our city paper Harbin Daily.
The job is issued by Beihua University. The university is running some summer English courses for people at different ages, ranging from children to adults. They need a foreign teacher, which is a wonderful choice available to you. Their requirements are as follows:
The teacher should be a native English speaker with the university degree, education majors preferred. If you are interested, you should bring your foreign expert certificate along to Beihua University, or you may contact them by calling 0451-8877645 or sending them an email with the address: .
Considering all the aspects of the job, I think it is best suited to you, since your major is teaching English as a foreign language. Moreover, this job is a well-paid and interesting regardless.
I desperately hope to meet you soon in Harbin.
Yours,
Li Hua