大学竞赛试题写作部分简介(2)---赛才网

大学竞赛试题写作部分简介（2）

而最新的2001年全国研究生考试也将作文部分由原来的15分提到了20分,足以看出提高写作水平的重要性和迫切性。

四。样卷评析

Directions: For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Failure a Bad Thing.You should base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below: 要求:1.失败是常有的事。

2.人们对失败有各种不同的态度。

3.我对失败的态度。

作文的评分样卷及说明:

14分。押切题。表达思想清楚,内容比较充实,文字流畅,句子结构多样。基本无语言错误,但有个别地方不够贴切。

Failure is a common thing in our daily life.As a student,we some-times fail to get high scores in our examinations. When we play games we can't avoid being beaten by the others.And there are times when we fail to do more satisfactory work.The failures happen naturally and almost everyone of us has such experience.

However,there are different attitudes towards failure.Some people lose heart in failure,they think the world is at its end.Some people don't take failure seriously,they just let it be,while some others learn much from failure and therefore see the light of hope through failure.

In my opinion,what really counts is not failure itself,but what we think of failure and do after failure.As long as we don't give up and believe in ourselves and in the meantime learn something failure,we'll certainly make our marks in the end.So I'm never afraid of failure,for I believe that failure is not a bad thing,

11分:切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯。但有少量错误和用词不妥之处。

Failure is a thing that often happens.It is impossible to have no obstacles when people do something.If they don't prepare well or make some mistakes, people will fail.So everyone involved famous persons have experience of failure.

However people have some different kinds of attitudes to fail-ure.Some feel disappointed and won't go on.But others regard failure as a good thing,they find out the reason why they have failed and do their best to get over the obstacles.So they success finally.Many Scientists' stories can prove it.

To tell the truth,I don't like failure.But when I fail,I will not feel disappointed and stop working.Because failure isn't a bad thing.I will learn something from failure and gain success. 8分:基本切题。文字表达个别地方不够清楚,意思比较连贯,但句子较单调,有一些语言错误,其中有几处严重的错误。

Failure is the thing which is always happen.Not passing an exami-nation during one's study is a failure.Not winning in a sports meeting to a sportsman is a failure.Not successing to finish an science experiment to a scientist is a failure.

People have different views of the failure.Some people think that failure means to a new begin.Some people will give up his plan because of the failure. Some people will get something new from the failure and do it again.

I will regard it as a new start and do it again.Because failure is the thing which is always happen.If I give up every time I will never do anything.I believe that failure is not a bad thing.

5分:基本切题,但连贯性差,语言错误较多,且许多是严重错误,影响思想的表达。 All of us are often failure.When we do something,we can't be sure about it and we don't know whether it will be failure or success.

People have all kinds of thinking of failure.Somebody is angry,somebody is disappointed, somebody keeps silence and others try do it again.And so on, it is different from everyone. I'm often failure else.As soon as I am failure.I think over it in order to find the mistakes.

2分:语言支离破碎,基本上找不到一个完整的句子,标点符号及拼写错误比比皆是,通篇条理不清,思路紊乱,不如所云。

Is failure a bad thing,if we have it,to fact with it,or not?To us,failure is often thing,let us surposed,if someone who has never felled and do everything very easy,then,you see,he isn't a happy man.Everyone had failure,you can not imagie what kind of failure has touched to a success man.

To the failure,someone facts with it and try to make the failure into a encouragement thing and find why they felled and make up his mind to resolve the problume while,someone is give up what he had very done,ever dissapointment,he isn't the great man.

I know,live is include of failure and success,a really man will not run away from the failure,failure isn't a bad think,failure is neccessary if will fact with it for ever,I will success.