从三篇范文看考研英语大作文结构

从三篇范文看考研英语大作文结构

As is shown above, in the middle of the picture stands two persons , looking at the broken wine bottle,showing different reactions, one signing that “there is nothing left”, and the other being grateful that “there is something left”. Simple as the picture is, a certain informative information is revealed in it.

The picture demonstrates two strikingly different attitudes, pessimism and optimism, when facing the same thing and tells us that the enthusiasm and the optimism are of paramount importance when it comes to the personal growth,especially in this ever rapid changing modern society. Due attention to this quality is attached by individuals and even the whole society. Those with optimistic attitude to the life can relieve not only pressure, but also anxiety and such problems as depression and solitude. Favorable attitude to the life can broaden our mind, enrich our experience and enhance our vigor and then create an enthusiastic environment for our society. People with the spirit of optimism can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into society, and even attain social status. Were there no positive mental attitude, never would we taste the real happiness of the success.

To sum up, one’s view and attitude on his life determines his future. Different life attitude may bring about entirely different results. Many psychologically fragile and pessimistic young people around us too easily become discouraged and give up when confronting with difficulties, which makes it hard to believe those youngsters with such mind state can face the challenge and become pillars of the society.

[结构分析：]

第一段：大作文的第一段通常会对漫画进行简要描述，然后在该段段尾或下一段段首点名漫画寓意，对于该范文而言，首段的结构形式表现为：引出图片的常用句型(As is shown above) + (图片场景描述：40单词以内即可)+ 引出中心句的过渡句(Simple as the picture is, a certain informative information is revealed in it.)

第二段：大作文文章中段通常对会论点(即漫画寓意)进行分析、拓展，为了使上下文过渡自然，逻辑清晰，通常会在第二段首句使用承接上文的过渡句引出论点，对于该范文而言，中段的结构形式表现为：承接引出论点(或中心句)的过渡句(The picture demonstrates two strikingly different attitudes, pessimism and optimism, when facing the same thing...society )+ 中心句 + (对中心观点句进行进一步的解释，通常来说，两到三个句子进行阐释即可)

第三段：大作文尾段总结全文，呼应主题句，再次明确作者主张，对于该范文而言，尾段结构形式表现为：常用总结句型(To sum up)再次呼应中心句(one’s view and attitude on his life determines his future. Different life attitude may bring about entirely different results )+ Example作结

● 2012考研英语范文（2）

The picture displays two people staring at the same over-turned bottle with distinctively different looks on their faces. While one is crying for the end of the world since more than half of the water is poured out, the other is relieved since there is still some water left in the bottle.

It does not take a genius to figure out the implied meaning of the cartoon: when the same situation is presented in front of us, how we choose to view it is a determining factor. As a unit in

society, we are unavoidably influenced by others and something is bound to be out of our control. And we simply can not expect to experience an obstacle-free growing path, and when difficulties, frustrations and disappointments present themselves in front of us, do we choose to be pessimistic, blaming what is holding us back, or do we choose to be optimistic, strongly believing that all these are just a blessing in disguise?As a college student, we are also constantly faced with challenges, such as the possibility of failure we are facing to enter graduate school, and instead of viewing it as the water out of the overturned bottle, we can, and we should regard it as the remaining water in the bottle.

Beauty is in the eyes of the beloved, and positivity is in the eyes of us who choose to think positively.

[结构分析：]

该篇同题范文在写作结构上与上一篇范文基本一致。

第一段：引出图片的常用句型+对图片场景的描述(40个单词以内即可)

第二段：引出中心句的过渡句( It does not take a genius to figure out the implied meaning of the cartoon)+ 中心句 + 对中心句进行进一步解释的句子(3句左右即可)

第三段：该段没有使用典型的总结词：如To sum up或In conclusion进行总结，而是使用名言作结，用另一种表达方式对主题进行强化。该种结尾方式非典型的写作方法，适合英语程度较好，语言组织表达能力较强的考生使用。

● 2012考研英语范文（3）

Things are decided by attitudes instead of themselves, just as the cartoon above reveals – towards a bottle of red wine, most flowing on the floor and less leaving in the bottle, the left man is greatly depressed with one hand covering his eyes, saying “completely emptied”, however, the right man is so glad to see still less left that he can’t help shouting, “there is a little left! How lucky!”.

It’s very clear that the drawer intends to remind us of the importance of attitudes and hopes us always remain an optimistic attitude in daily life, no matter what bad things happen. Don’t cry for sprinkled milk, but optimistically focus on what still left and what we can do to prevent things worse. If we feel dispirited and pessimistic about difficult situations, we never conquer them and succeed. Examples like this are numerous; just take the founding of the people’s Republic of China as an example. If Chairman Mao was pessimistic about the revolution, especially in Failure in 1927, how can he build such a beautiful country?

Although optimism isn’t a master key to success, it can lighten the hope of success and help us move step by step at least. Therefore, whenever we are and whatever we do, we must read and live our life with a positive attitude. We must believe optimistically, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”

[结构分析：]

第一段：与前两篇范文不同，该篇范文在首段开头即点名文章寓意，首段结构形式表现为：

论点(或中心观点句)+ 引出图片常用句型(just as the cartoon above reveals; As is shown above)+ 对图片场景描述(40个单词左右)

第二段：对中心观点句进行进一步阐释+相关示例

第三段：作者在结尾辩证的总结自己的论点并以名人名言作结——以简洁概括的形式再次对中心论点进行强化，呼应首段中心句。

● 总结

综上，大作文在写作结构上虽然因作者个性偏好不同，程度水平有别而略有差异，但其基本结构可以总结如下：

第一段：引出图片的常用句型 + 对图片的简要描述

第二段：引出中心句(论点)的过渡句 + 中心句 + 对中心句的进一步阐释(使用事例支持论点)

第三段：总结，呼应中心句(具体而言，可从不同角度进一步阐释中心句)