2014年8月9日雅思写作真题解析及雅思大作文范文
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2014年8月9日雅思写作真题
Task1：表格题，竖四横三。
2001和2006年AUS三个地方的住宅类型（+other）所占的比例澳大利亚三个地方的住所偏好比较
Task2：旧题重现
A类大作文是2011年7月30日的原题： Some people think thatdangerous sports should be banned, but others think the peopleshould have freedom to choose sports activities. Discuss bothviews and give your opinion. 有人认为政府应该禁止年轻人们从事危险性的运动,有人认为人们有自由选择自己喜欢的运动方式,讨论两种观点?（旧题重现）
2014年8月9日雅思写作范文
首段：
Such is a human nature to explore and experience the
unknown. A trend is that numerous people are fond of
embarking on challenging sports events, such as mountain
biking, rock climbing and scuba diving, especially among thosedynamic young adults. Those who pursue excitement and thesense of refreshment in the dull routine daily life claim that lifewithout risk is no life at all.(65)
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翻译：探究和体验未知的世界是人之本性, 当下,
很多人,尤其是精力充沛的年轻人, 喜欢从事充满挑战的竞技体育项目,例如山地自行车, 攀岩和海底潜水等。那些喜欢在枯燥的，日复一日的生活中追求刺激和新鲜的人声称, 人生没有冒险就不能称其为人生。
点评：首段自然开篇，没有争议焦点和写作意图，没有模版痕迹，留下想象空间。
二段：我的口吻谈及极限运动的利好：
Granted, a great many virtues could be gained via
undertaking those risky or demanding sports activities. Primarily,the extreme adventures can be taken as is a sort of effective wayto help players relieve their pressure and relax their mood，because the occupied modern life often deprive one's right ofseeking relaxation. The popularity of bungee jumping accountsfor risky sports' significant function in terms of reducing stress.Imaginably, one's working or study efficiency could be highlyenhanced after doing his or her favorite sports events. Moreover,not only can the extreme adventures exert wholesome impacts,but also it could foster one's skills, chasten one's tenacity andforge one's frustration toleration. Some extreme
adventures，such as rock climbing and surfing， requires hightechniques or much perseverance. Ultimately, the extremeadventures could be developed into tempting tourism items,which could generate immense economic value.(143)
翻译：的确，从事极限运动利好很多。 第一,
这是一种极佳的方式帮助运动者缓解压力, 愉悦心情, 因为紧张的现代生活已经剥夺了人们放松休闲的权利。蹦极运动的流行就解释了运动在缓解压力方面的积极作用。可以想象,
运动之后,人们的工作学习效率都会提高。另外,
极限运动不仅仅有益健康, 还能培养人的技巧,
磨砺人的坚韧性以及铸造人的挫折忍受力, 一些运动, 例如攀岩和冲浪,就需要人有极高的技巧和毅力。 最后,
极限运动可以开发成热门的旅游项目, 创造巨大的经济价值。
三段：谈及极限运动的弊端：
Nonetheless, problems invariably ensue. One possible
downside is that some perilous sports activities might becomethe roots of injuries and agonies. There exist high levels of
injuries, which sometimes disable players and even ruin their
whole lives. Another adverse aspect is that some intense extremesports are merely an excuse for violence. To illustrate, boxinginvolves excessive violence and bloody contents so that itimposes adverse impact on adolescent TV viewers, namely, itmight arouse their sadistic impulse.(78)
翻译：然而, 问题随之而来。第一， 危险性极高的运动可能会导致意外受伤和痛苦。这些意外有可能导致人的残疾或者毁掉人的一生。第二， 一些剧烈的极端运动会成为暴力的借口。例如,
拳击比赛含有太多的暴力和血腥, 对于年轻人有不良的影响,
例如诱发他们的施虐冲动。
Personally, I encourage the extreme adventures, for it is asymbol of freedom, so it is citizens' elementary right to opt forhis or her favorite sports activities. Efforts should be made toensure risky sports events are thrilling, amusing and
profit-making, however, to prevent accident and injury is highlyrecommended. (52)
翻译：个人而言, 我十分鼓励极限运动，这是自由的象征，这是公民的基本权利选择自己喜欢的运动。我们应该努力保证运动的刺激，有趣和盈利，但是, 采取措施去预防受伤和意外又是高度推荐的。
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