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(09辽宁)
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I
could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only
one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could
only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So
I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased. If I
showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You
can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own
bicycle.
(10辽宁)
Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about her
except for that she was strange. She didn't talk many. Her hair was black
and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater although
in the summer. She was, in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed
care what the rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I
didn't really want to get closest to her. It was only when we did their
chemistry project together that I begin to understand why Christine
dressed the way she did.
In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were steady, around
three per weeks. When however, on Monday, January 16. a science
fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television, there
was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the
States. The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler, who directlyresponsible
for the study of all such reports, decided to making his findings known.
They wrote an article, which said that all UFO reports could be explained
for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation, there
was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings, because the rate
remained above the previous level.
12年辽宁
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind tor you to
let us bring Anne's friend. Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the
journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for
a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we
drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In
the car park Gina nearly got knocked over as a car drove out far too
quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents'
and made our own way to home.
Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much
time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works
from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has
ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other
teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager
to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.
Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of
the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as
many as we missed him.
14辽宁
Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to
settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.
We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is
difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The
early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all
night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a
day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too
much for us, considering how closely the houses are.
We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can
figure a good way of settling the matter.
11年全国II
Dear George,
It’s been a week after we left your family and we are now back home.
Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing
us for the wonderful meals. After we said goodbye to you, we went to
Washington D.C., which we stayed for three days. My brother was so
much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying
another couple of day. However, my father had to return to work on
Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It was really a nice
experience. If you’d like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better
than happy to be your guide.
课标英语 E1[2011·全国卷]
My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station
buy a ticket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I
would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned
around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone
had stolen it.Luckily,I had all my money on my pocket,but the only
clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any
luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes.
I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
课标英语.E1[2011·陕西卷]
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my
home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite
actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time,but I rushed back
home to get.Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they have finished the
scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere.I was really
disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was
right there in the front of me!I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I
had my photo taken with him,but he signed his name on my shirt!
[2011·重庆卷]
Today is Sunday. I’ve been in Canada for two months. This is the first
time that I’ve been away my family for such a long time. With the help of
Katia, a roommate of me, I’ve soon got used to live without my parents
around. Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We
became friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English is
a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot
about our own family. We’re both surprised that Chinese culture or
Russian culture are so different. Now, we’re planning a small party for
the next Sunday. There, Katia will introduce me to some of her friends,
one of who has been to China several times. I just can’t wait.
改错答案09辽宁
When I was in high school, most of my friend (friends) had
bicycle. I hoped I could also have it (one). One day I saw a
second-hand bicycle, that (which) was only one hundred yuan.
I asked my father (在此加for) the money. But he said he could
only give me half of the money. He (I) should find the other half
myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the (去掉the ) school.
My father was pleased if (when) I showed him the money a month
after (later). He gives (gave) me the other fifty. You can imagine
how much (去掉much) happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.
10辽宁
第一节 短文改错
76. class改为classes 77. 去掉for
78. many 改为 much 79. worn 改为 wore
80. attractively改为attractive 81. seemed 后加to
82. classmate改为classmates 83. closest改为close
84. 无错 85. begin改为began
11辽宁
In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports were (was) steady, around three per
weeks(week). When however, on Monday, January 16. a science fiction film about visitors
to (from)outer space was shown on television, there was the (an) immediate increase in
reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler,
who (was/is) directly responsible for the study of all such reports, decided to making
(make) his findings known. They (he) wrote an article, which said that all UFO reports
could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow (Following) this
explanation, there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings, because (although
/though/but/yet) the rate remained above the previous level.
12年辽宁
1.第1句have→had【解析】由后面的was可知,这儿应该用过去时态.
2. 第2句 for→of【解析】It’s kind of you为固定用法.
3. 第3句 Unfortunate→Unfortunately【解析】这儿用副词作状语.
4. 第4句 for→as【解析】as a result固定搭配.
5. 第4句 mile→miles【解析】mile是可数名词,并且前面是six.
6. 第5句 unless→until【解析】这儿后面一句是一个时间状语从句,意思是我们一直等到路通了.
7. 第6句 here→there【解析】叙述的是别的地方发生的事,所以用there.
8. 第6句 car前加a【解析】car不是特指,并且是可数名词,所以前面要加a.
9. 第7句 they→we【解析】叙述的是我们做的事,所以用we.
10. 第7句去掉to【解析】make one’s way home中home为副词,所以前面不用介词to.
13辽宁
little sleep and
on “He has
ruined his
has
”︿visit to Mr.
health what a
Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.
His
stepped
that he missed us
pictures
much
2014辽宁
1.第一段:去掉bothers后的to bother sb.打扰某人。
2.第二段第一句:time→times 考查名词复数。several times好几次。
3.第二段第二句:understanding→understand 根据it’s difficult to do sth.句型可知。
4.第二段第三句:have→has 考查主谓一致。the early morning barking为单数,所以谓语动词也应为单数形式。
5.第二段第四句:Beside→Besides 此处应为副词besides而不是介词beside。
6.第二段第四句:average前的a→an 考查冠词。average为以元音音素开头的单词,所以应用冠词an。
7.第二段第五句:starts→started 考查时态。因为是今天早晨发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。
8.第二段第六句:closely→close 考查形容词。形容词close作表语。
9.第三段:our→your 考查物主代词。
10.第三段:在figure后加out 根据动词短语figure out(想出)可知答案。
11年全国II
1. after改为since “It’s been+时间段+since…”为固定句式,表示“自从……有多长时间了”
2. them改为us 人称代词指代错误,第一句话中提到的是we。
3. for改为with provide sb with sth给某人提供某物=provide sth for sb。
4. which 改为where
5. 去掉much “so+adj…”为结果状语从句,much多余。
6. staying改为stay beg sb to do sth央求某人做某事。
7. day改为days couple是复数,所以day加s。
8. fly改为flew 时态错误,前面使用的过去时,时态应该保持一致。
9. 加a make a trip to去旅行。
10. better改为more more than非常。
课标英语 E1[2011·全国卷] My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket
buying
to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that
there
I would go to Xiamen for∧long holiday. I bought my ticket
a
but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then
and
I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I
in were
had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.
luggage
When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to[KG*2] me lots of
friend’s
clothes. I feel very happy that I could change m y clothes at last.
felt
76. buy→buying。buying为伴随状语。
77. here→there。这里的there指杭州,因此不可以用here。
78. for 与long holiday之间加 a。a…holiday为固定搭配。
79. but→and。前后为并列的、连续的动作,没有转折的意思。
80. (on my pocket前的)on→in。表示“在……里面”,因此用in。
81. (I had后的)was→were。clothes为主语,故用were。
82. luggages→luggage。
83. friend→friend’s。表达“到了朋友家”,因此用所有格,即friend’s home。
84. 去掉to。lend后面跟sb. sth.的搭配,也可以用lend sth. to sb.结构。
85. feel→felt。本文叙述的是过去的事情。
课标英语.E1[2011·陕西卷]
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film
making
with one of my favourite actor. I didn’t have my camera
actors
with me at that time,but I rushed back home to get ∧.
so/and it
Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they have finished the
had
scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere.I was really
anywhere
disappointing and about to leave when he walked out ∧ a
disappointed of
building.He was right there in the' front of me!I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I had my photo taken with
have
him,but he signed his name on my shirt!
make→making 作后置定语,用非谓语动词,与所修饰词是主动关系,故用v课标英语
英语.E1[2011·重庆卷]
【答案】
Today is Sunday. I’ve been in Canada for two months.
This is the first time that I’ve been away ∧ my family for such a 76. ____from____ long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me,_I’ve 77.____mine____
soon got used to live without my parents around. Katia, like 78. ___living____
many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became 79. ____is____
friends shortly after we meet each other. Although her English 80. ____met____
is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we 81.____hard____
usually talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprised 82.__families__
that Chinese culture or Russian culture are so different. Now, 83.____and____
we’re planning a small party for th e' next Sunday. There, Katia 84. ____the'_____ will introduce me to some of her friends, one of_who has been 85. ___whom___
to China several times. I just can’t wait.
【要点综述】这是一篇记叙文,介绍了作者在加拿大两个月以来的生活适应及人际交往情况。
76. away后加from be away“远离”,其后不能接宾语;be away from“远离……”可接宾语。
77. me→mine 表示“我的一位舍友”用a roommate of mine或one of my roommates。
78. live→living be used to doing sth.表示“习惯做某事”;used to do sth.表示“过去常常做某
事”;be used to do sth.表示“被用来做某事”。
79. are→is 该句的主语是Katia,所以谓语动词用单数形式。
80. meet→met 主句动词became为过去时态形式,从句动词meet应改为过去式,与其保持时态一致。
81. hardly→hard hard“难的,困难的”,hardly“几乎不”,前者符合句意。
82. family→families 该行中的our指的是Katia和I两个人的(家庭),所以family应改为复数形式。[来源:学,科,网]
83. or→and 此处是并列关系而不是选择关系,故将or改为and。
84. 去掉the next Sunday指的是从现在算起的下个礼拜天,而the next Sunday则指的是从过去算起的下个礼拜天。由Now可知前者正确。
85. who→whom 引导定语从句时,who不能直接跟在介词之后,介词后应接宾格关系代词whom。此处的whom指代的是先行词friends。