英语作文辅导
英语作文辅导
How to get on well with others
固始县实验中学九年级三班 方航 指导教师：胡洪艳
How to get on well with others
As we know, students should learn how to get on well with others. There is some advice which we can follow to make friends. First, we should learn to share our things with others. It can help develop a closer friendship with our friends. Second, everyone is happy to be respected by others, so we should respect others. Third, the communication between you and your friends is also very important. It’s better for us to communicate with others face to face to show our feelings. I also think that we should learn to care for others. They will think you are helpful and kind so they will be glad to get along with you.
教师评语（指导教师：胡洪艳）： 这是一篇很成功的作文。小作者思路清晰，语言简明地概述了几条关于友谊互动的小窍门。而且小作者还成功地运用了定语从句，宾语从句和被动语态，这些语法大多数学生是不敢随便在作文中体现出来的。本篇短文结构严谨，实属一篇考场佳作。