英语写作中的时态
叙事一般用过去式,对应完成时进行时等都要进行变换。而其中的议论一般是使用一般时,因为是自己的评论。想法感受等比如感觉疲劳那用过去时,而光荣等能持续到现在的,一般就用现在时。
如果是客观真理事实,那么无论如何都要用现在时。
议论文、说明文一般用一般时。
特别注意在直接引语中要用一般时态(特殊情况除外)
1.要是明天下雨的话,这场比赛就要取消。
[误] The match will be canceled if it will rain tomorrow.
[正] The match will be canceled if it rains tomorrow.
分析:在条件从句里要用一般现在时态表将来,所以will rain应该改为rains. 但是will 如果表示意愿的话,可以用条件从句或时间从句表将来。但主语一定要是人。例如:
If you will come, you can.
如果你愿意的话,你可以跟我去。
2.地理老师告诉我们,地球是绕太阳转的。
[误] The geography teacher told us that the earth moved round the sun.
[正] The geography teacher told us that the earth moves round the sun. 分析:根据时态一致性原则,主句的谓语如果是一般过去时态时,从句一般要与其时态对应。即从句的时态必须用过去时态、过去进行时态、过去完成时态等。但如果从句所表达的内容是一种规律、习惯性的东西,从句的谓语也不要改变。
3.你总是犯这个错误。
[误] You always make the same mistake.
[正] You are always making the same mistake.
分析:be + 频度副词 + 现在分词,这种进行时态,是一种表达具有感情色彩的表达。一般现在时态不能表达这个含义。
4.我们马上就要出发了,因此没有时间去看他了。
[误] We are about to leave at once, so there is no time to visit him.
[正] We are about to leave, so there is no time to visit him.
分析:be about to do sth意思是“即将,马上…”。它不能和以一时间状语连用:
tomorrow, at once, soon, in a moment, in time, immediately等。
5.我本来打算去告诉你的,可是我错过了最后一班车。
[误] I would tell you about it, but I missed the last bus.
[正] I was going to tell you about it, but I missed the last bus.
分析:过去打算要做什么,要用was/were going to do这个句型。would do 这种将来时态没有计划和安排的含义。
6.转眼间在这里一下就住了十年了。
[误] It is ten years since we have lived here.
[正] It is ten years since we lived here.
分析:It is + 时间 + since…意思是“自从…以来又有…”。在此句型中,前面主句的时态应该用is 或has been, 在现代英语中,多用is 。从句的时态应该用过去时态,如果前面主句用的是过去时态,后面的从句相应该用过去完成时态。例如:It was three years since he had joined the army five years ago.
7.这是他第二次去美国了。
[误] This is the second time that he went to the United States.
[正] This is the second time that he has been to the United States.
分析:要表达第几次做什么事,应该用“it is + 序数词 + (that ) + 主语 + have done ”这个句型。如果该句型里的is 用过去时态,那么,从句里的时态也应该用过去完成时态。那么这个句型为:It was + 序数词 + (that ) + 主语 + had done.
8.妈妈对孩子说:“作业没做完,你不出去玩。”
[误] You can’t go out to play as your homework is not being finished.
[正] You can’t go out to play before your homework will be finished. 分析: before 是一个表示时间的连词,它连接的时间状语从句应该且一般现在时态表将来,因此,从句的谓语应该由将来时态改一般现在时态。
9.他们一回到家里,就下起雨来了。
[误] They hardly got home when it began to rain.
[正] They had hardly got home when it began to rain.
[正]Hardly had they got home when it began to rain.
分析:hardly…when/before…是一组连词,意思是“一…就…”。在这个连词连接的句子中,句子的前半部分应该用过去完成时态。后部分用过去时态。在这个句型中,如果hardly 放在句首,这个句子应该倒倒装。具有相同用法与意思的连词还有:no sooner…than…; scarcely…when/before…等。
10.上个星期我们本来打算来看你的。
[误] We hoped to come and see you last week.
[正] We had hoped to come and see you last week.
分析:had hoped to do 表示过去没有实现的愿望。类似的句型还有如下:
had meant to do (==meant to have done …)
had intended to do (==intended to have done …)
had thought to do (==thought to have done…)
had hoped that + 主语 + would do…
11.他打电话告诉我说他丢失的眼镜找到了。
[误] He phoned to tell me that he found the lost glasses.
[正] He phoned to tell me that he had found the lost glasses.
分析:根据时态的致性原则,主句用一般过去时态时,从句应该用过去时态(过去进行时态、一般过去时态、过去完成时态)。如果从句的动作发生在主句谓语动词所表示的动作之前,从句应该用过去完成时态。
12.要是我买了昨天的音乐会的票那就好了。
[误] If only I bought the ticket for the concert yesterday.
[正] If only I had bought the ticket for the concert yesterday.
分析:if only 是一个固定词组,意思是“要是…那就好了”。这是表达一个针对过去的一个虚拟的愿望。在该句型中,谓语致词应该用过去完成时态。类似这样的表达虚拟的句型还有:wish that + 主语 + had done….(希望过去做过…);would/had rather (that) + 主语 + had done …。
13.希望你们能够马到成功。
[误] You are hoped to succeed at the beginning.
[正] It is hoped that you will succeed at the beginning.
分析:hope sb to do sth这外句型是错误的。hope 不能带不定式作复合宾语。要表达这个意思有两种方法:① it is hoped that…; ② We hoped that you will…
14. 这个问题目前很难解决。
[误] This problem is difficult to be solved at present.
[正] This problem is difficult to solve at present.
分析:在“…adj + to do”这种结构中,作状语的不定式与该的主语构成逻辑动词关系,习惯上,这下不定式应该用主动表被动。
15. 你应该在8:00 赶到。
[误] You supposed to arrive at 8:00.
[正] You are supposed to arrive at 8:00.
分析:be supposed to do sth这是一个句型,意思是“理应。。。,应当。。。,按理。。。”。 如果用于否定,意思是“不可。。。,不许。。。”。表示一种委婉的禁止。例如:
You are not supposed to smoke in this building.你可不要在这栋建筑物里抽烟。
16. 在那些日子里,那些工人们被迫工作12小时以上。
[误] The workers are made work over twenty hours a day in those days.
[正] The workers are made to work over twenty hours a day in those days. 分析:动词不定式在使径动词后make, let及感管动词后feel, watch,
see, notice, hear, listen to, observe等动词后作宾语补时,常省略to ,但转换成被动语态时,一定要加上这个to.
17. 这种布摸起来很柔软。
[误] This kind of cloth is felt soft.
[正] This kind of cloth feels soft.
分析:感管动词feel, taste, sound, smell, look, seem, appear等的主动形式表被动含义。
18. 他讲的英语人家听不懂。
[误] He can’t make himself understand in English.
[正] He can’t make himself understood in English.
分析:make oneself + 过去分词,这是一个句型,意思是“让自己被人家所理解”。类似这样的动词还有:feel, hear, realize, understand,pay attention to, know等。
19. 你昨天把什么送去修理了。
[误] What did you have to repair yesterday?
[正] What did you have repaired yesterday?
分析:have sth done,此句型的意思是“让某事被做”。
20. 那栋房子是属于他的。
[误] That house is belonged to him.
[正] That house belong to him.
分析:belong to是及物动词,但是没有被动语态。以下动词同样没有被动语态:take place; break out等。