英语短文改错
(2015届辽宁省月考)短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
The other day after work, I was walking down the street while I saw a boy riding a nice unicycle, one of those bicycle with only one wheel. Dressing in all pink from head to toe, he was singing a song which was
sounded like a kid’s song. I thought he must be total crazy. Just then, a lady dropped 20-dollar bill on the ground, but he didn’t realize it and started to walk away. The guy in pink picked out the money and gave it back to her. After that, he rode on but soon disappeared before the lady could thank him. How a strange and good guy!
第一行:while改为when:was/were doing sth when … 是固定搭配;
第二行:bicycle改为bicycles,those后应当用复数;dressing 改为dressed,dress是及物动词,与主语是被动关系,故用过去分词形式;
第三行:去掉sounded前的was,sound是不及物动词,不能用被动语态;total改为totally,用副词修饰形容词;
第四行:dropped后加a,一张20美元的钞票;bill是可数名词;he改为she,此处应当指代的是a lady; 第五行:out改为up,pick up是固定短语,捡起;but改为and,上下句是并列关系;
第六行:How改为what,固定句型:what a/an adj+可数名词单数=How adj a/an 可数名词单数。 (2015届山西省山大附中月考) 短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.
1.waited后面加for 句意:有一次我在等车来。Wait是不及物动词,waited后面加for
2.past改成 passed 句意:30分钟过去了。Past是介词,这句话缺少谓语动词: passed
3.feet.改成 foot 句意:我决定步行。On foot步行
4.when 改成than 句意:我已离开公共汽车就到了。使用no sooner„. Than„,句型
5.a 改成 the 句意:如果我选择等下一班车。特指the next bus
6.other改成another句意:我还要再等30分钟。Another+数词+名词“另外„
7.do 改成did 时间状语是Only then用一般过去式:did
8.possible 改成possibly句意:不耐烦可能浪费我们投入的所有的努力。修饰waste用副词possibly
9.去掉it 这是定语从句,that在定语从句中做宾语,去掉it
10.lose改成losing be close to doing几乎做„,lose改成losing
(2015届山东省日照一中达标检测)短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
第二行:1.时态:go→ went前后时态一致。2.代词误用:ours→our.这里要用our作定语。而ours则不能作定语。
第三行:3.删掉so,前一分句为as soon as 引导的时间状语从句,主句前再不需要连词。4. 介词误用Before→After根据题意是等了半个小时以后,而不是以前。故用After.
第四行:5.副词误用:impatiently→impient这里是形容词和前面的get形成系表结构。6.连词误用:and→but根据句意需要转折,而不是顺承。
第五行:7.主谓一致误用: were→ was there be 句型中be 和最近的名词保持一致。8.fish前加a.根据题意这里是钓了一条鱼及根据fish后的was,故在此加a.
第六行:9.名词复数误用:minute→minutes few修饰的名词要用复数形式。
10.非谓语误用:Felt→Feeling根据句意,feel 和句子主语之间是主动关系而非被动关
(2015届河北省衡水中学考试)短文改错。
Dear Editor,
I used to be a physician in the children’s department of a hospital. Form time to time I treated children who had poisoned by medicine with older family members. The children didn’t know the medicine was danger ; they just knew it tasted sweet. Children easily open the bottle what we now use in China.
Some days before I talked about medicines with an American. He showed me a sort of plastic bottle. The design was quite simple and I’m sure our Chinese factories could produce these bottles. The top of the bottle can be opened by pressing down on them while turning. This is difficult for most young children to do so , though grown-up can open these bottles very easily.
I’m certainly that the expense of making such tops would be very small. As a doctor , I’d love to see this doing. And most parents would be grateful.
Sincerely yours
Li Hua
1. had 后面加been 考查被动语态。Be poisoned by 被。。所毒害。
2. with—for 考查介词。句意:时不时,我会收治那些被大人的药所误食中毒的孩子。
3. danger—dangerous 考查形容词。句意:孩子们不知道这是危险的;
4. what ---that/which/去掉what 考查宾语从句。the bottle做先行词,定语从句we now use in China
缺少宾语故用that/which或者把之省略;
5. before—ago 考查副词。句意:许多天后我, 我与美国人谈论此事;
6. them—it 考查代词。句意:瓶子的顶部只有用力按压旋转才能打开。It代指瓶子。
7. to do so 去掉so 考查固定句型。To do 做后置定语用来修饰most young children.
8. grown-up---grown-ups 考查名词的复数。句意:虽然这对大人来说很容易打开。
9. certainly---certain 考查形容词。句意:我确定做这些盖的费用很小。形容词做表语。
10. doing—done 考查动词的用法。See sth done看
(2015届黑龙江省哈六中期末)短文改错 (共10分;每小题1分,满分10分)
Cheetahs(猎豹) are the fast land creatures in the world. Why would a cheetah need to be able to running so fastly? The only animal that comes close to the cheetah’s amazed speed is its best favorite food, the
gazelle(瞪羚). In order to catch up a meal that’s as swift as the wind, the cheetah had to develop the ability. It must run as fast as, or faster as, the gazelle. Otherwise, it will face starvation. Cheetahs are a excellent example of the effects of natural selection. There is several species of large cats in the world, but none of them can match the speed of the cheetah.
1. fast——fastest in the world提示我们要用最高级。
2.running——run be able to 后用动词原形
3.fastly——fast fast 既可以做形容词,也可以做副词,英语中无fastly。
4.amazed——amazing –ed修饰人,-ing修饰物
5.去掉best favorite=like…best,这里重复,去掉best。
6. catch up后加上with catch up with 追上;赶上
7.had ——has 短文整体时态用一般现在时。
8. as——than 句中出现faster比较级,故用than。
9. a——an excellent example元音发音前用an。
10. is——are several species是复数,故用there are。
(2015届浙江省重点中学协作体测试)短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at
relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play
the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday!
However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked
down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I
hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.
1. made→ makes 考查谓语动词的时态:表达自己现在的感受,故用一般现在时态
2. at→ to 考查固定表达look forward to doing sth.渴望作某事
3. movie→ movies 考查可数名词的单复数:several+可数名词的复数
4.thebasketball with my classmates. 去掉the考查零冠词的用法:球类运动前不加冠词
5. What→ How 考查感叹词的用法:How + adj.+ a/an + n. +主语+谓语+ …
6. different→ differently考查副词的用法:副词修饰动词作状语
7. go→ to go 考查宾补动词的用法:want sb. to do sth
8. Beside→ Besides 考查副词词义:besides此外
9. keeping→ kept 考查非谓语动词的用法:keep作定语与被修饰词a bird构成逻辑上的动宾关系,故用过去分词kept表被动
10. him→ them 考查代词的指代:此处指代上文的my parents故用第三人称复数人称代词宾格them
(2015届浙江省杭州二中月考)短文改错 (满分10分)
When father bought me a computer for a birthday present in last year, I felt very
excited. As we all know, that computers are getting more usefully nowadays. Much
information can be stored in it.
We can learn what is lately happened in the world on the Internet. In the past, people
have to do lots of work that was very dangerous. Now, computers can do it otherwise.
When an exam is come, I do exercises on my computer. Then it will correct them but tell me
the right answers.
1. for改成as 爸爸给我买了一台电脑作为生日礼物。
2. in 去掉 去年last year in多余。
3. that 去掉 As we all know,有逗号,是as引导的非限性定语从句,that多余。
4. usefully改成useful get变得+形容词。
5. it改成them 这里的代词指前面的computers,故用them。
6. is改成has 强调对现在造成的影响和结果,用现在完成时。我们通过网络可以了解世界上最近发生的事情
7. have改成 had 根据in the past,要用一般过去时。
8. otherwise改成instead 以前人们做大量危险的工作,现在电脑取代人们做这项工作。
9. come改成coming 由句意可知,考试还没有来临,come用现在正在进行表示将来。
10. but改成and 这里没有转折的意思。它会改正错误并且告诉我正确的答案。
(2015届云南省部分名校月考)短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
Kunming is a famous city with long history. Locating in the southwest of China, it is the capital city of Yunnan Province, it is called “the Spring City”. It is said that Kunming got it’s name over 2000 years ago and it had never changed since then. There is a large number of famous cultural and natural sites here, which have always been attraction to tourists from around the world. Tourists come not only to see the historically sites, but also because that it has beautiful scenery. A walk along the sides of the beautiful Dianchi Lake will offer a feast for everyone’s eyes. On a word, Kunming, as a famous saying goes, is a city which you will not want to leave once you have come.
第一行:1.with∧ long – a with a long history 历史悠久; 2. Locating –Located 位于„„,locate要用过去分词做状语;
第二行: 3. 第一个it –which 此处which引导的非限制性定语从句;4. it’s 改为its ,此处是形容词性物主代词做定语;
第三行:5. had –has 从那时到现在,应该用现在完成时态; 6. is —are there be 句型应当和be后面的名词保持人称和书的一致,a large number of famous cultural and natural sites是复数,故应该把is改成are 第四行:7. attraction –attractions attraction “吸引人的事物”是可数名词,对应前面的sites,故用复数形式。
When an exam is come, I do exercises on my computer. Then it will correct them but tell me
the right answers.
1. for改成as 爸爸给我买了一台电脑作为生日礼物。
2. in 去掉 去年last year in多余。
3. that 去掉 As we all know,有逗号,是as引导的非限性定语从句,that多余。
4. usefully改成useful get变得+形容词。
5. it改成them 这里的代词指前面的computers,故用them。
6. is改成has 强调对现在造成的影响和结果,用现在完成时。我们通过网络可以了解世界上最近发生的事情
7. have改成 had 根据in the past,要用一般过去时。
8. otherwise改成instead 以前人们做大量危险的工作,现在电脑取代人们做这项工作。
9. come改成coming 由句意可知,考试还没有来临,come用现在正在进行表示将来。
10. but改成and 这里没有转折的意思。它会改正错误并且告诉我正确的答案。
(2015届云南省部分名校月考)短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
Kunming is a famous city with long history. Locating in the southwest of China, it is the capital city of Yunnan Province, it is called “the Spring City”. It is said that Kunming got it’s name over 2000 years ago and it had never changed since then. There is a large number of famous cultural and natural sites here, which have always been attraction to tourists from around the world. Tourists come not only to see the historically sites, but also because that it has beautiful scenery. A walk along the sides of the beautiful Dianchi Lake will offer a feast for everyone’s eyes. On a word, Kunming, as a famous saying goes, is a city which you will not want to leave once you have come.
第一行:1.with∧ long – a with a long history 历史悠久; 2. Locating –Located 位于„„,locate要用过去分词做状语;
第二行: 3. 第一个it –which 此处which引导的非限制性定语从句;4. it’s 改为its ,此处是形容词性物主代词做定语;
第三行:5. had –has 从那时到现在,应该用现在完成时态; 6. is —are there be 句型应当和be后面的名词保持人称和书的一致,a large number of famous cultural and natural sites是复数,故应该把is改成are 第四行:7. attraction –attractions attraction “吸引人的事物”是可数名词,对应前面的sites,故用复数形式。
第五行:8. historically 改为historical 形容词做定语。9. that去掉 because是从属连词,that 多余; 第六行:10.On改为 In,in a word ,固定短语,表示“总之。”
(2015届四川省德阳市考试)短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
Indices and gentlemen, it’s my honor to be here to making a speech in English.Today what I' m going to share it with you is: always haw, a dream.You should be dreamer yourself.If you don' t have a dream.a plan and a wish, how can you know where you' re going? Maybe some of your creams are unrealistic, but as long as you worked hard , your dreams can be realized some days.
Dreams, on the one hand, is not costly: they don't cost some money. Even the poorest person on the world can have creams.On the other hand, they are expensive, for you have to work terribly hard to make it come true. Always lave a dream, ray friends.
第一行:making改为make,前面的to是不定时,后用动词原形;
第二行:be后加a,dreamer可是可数名词,故前面应加不定冠词a;
第三行:and改为or,本句是否定句,用or代替and;
第四行:worked改为work,前后句都是现在时态,时态要一致;days改为day,some day总有一天,你的梦想会实现;
第五行:is 改为 are,主语是dreams,要用复数;some改为any 否定句中用 any代替some; 第六行:第一个on改为in,in the world固定短语;
(2015届山东省日照市日照一中检测) 短文改错(共10小题,每题1分,满分10分)
I used to feel I was the sun in my family.But when my cousin was born,everyone pays more attention to her.So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well with her. With time went on,I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time.I tried to find a proper time to apologize.When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago,I took my cousin to play outside.In the way to the playground.I bought much snacks for her.Then we began chat.When we talked about their childhood,suddenly,I said“sorry”gently.She was silently,so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly.But after while she said:“Don’t say that.In my memory,you are always friendly.”
1. pays 改成paid 根据前文的used to过去常常,和我很引导的时间状语从句,此处应用过去时,故pays 改成paid。
2. With time went on 改成As time went on 或者 With time going on with不可引导从句,故将With改成As引导时间状语从句或将went改为going,就是改成with + 宾语 + v-ing的with复合结构。
3. have been 改成had been 因为主句的realize是过去时,宾语从句必须用过去时态,故have改为had。
4. day 改成days a few几个,修饰可数名词的复数形式,故day改为days。
5. In the way 改成On the way on the way to在„„的路上,in the way挡路的,根据题意将On改为On。
6. much snacks 改成many snacks snack是可数名词,much修饰不可数名词,故将much改为many。
7. chat改成chatting(our chat)或chat前加to begin后跟不定式或v-ing形式作宾语,故chat改成chatting(our chat)或chat前加to。
8. their 改成our when引导的从句主语是we,谈论的应该是我们的童年时代,故their 改成our。
9. silently改成silent she was应跟形容词作表语,故silently改成silent。
10. after while 改成after a while while作名词时表示一段时间其前加不定冠词a,after a
while一段时间以后。
(2015届吉林省实验中学二模)短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分, 满分10分) Dear Mom,
The Mother’s Day is coming. I’m sorry that I am abroad and can’t send your flowers, so I’m writing to you. Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you before. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by not only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good person. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you.
Hope you good health and much happiness every day!
Your little girl,
Jennifer
1.去掉the。 Mother’s Day为专有名词,前不用冠词。
2.your→you send sb sth送给某人某物,send后跟双宾,故your→you。
3. thank→thanks thank在这里作express的宾语,应用复数形式。
4.去掉on today,yesterday,this morning等这类表示时间的名词或名词短语前不加任何介词。
5.by→for thank sb for doing sth一因为某事而感激某人。故by→for。
6.teach→teaching not only„but also„连接的是for的并列宾语,故teach改为teaching。
7.had→have 此处说母亲已经做过的一切,应用现在完成时。
8.may后加not 根据句意:尽管我也许说不出来,但我真地爱您。故may后加not。
9.Whenever→Wherever。 根据句意:不管我在哪里,我都爱您。故Whenever→Wherever。
10. Hope→Wish。 Hope不用来表示祝愿,表示祝愿应用wish。
(2015届河南省洛阳市一模)短文改错(共10小题;每小题l分,满分10分)
Before I left my hometown to come to study in England,1 was partly terrified, and mostly
1 was excited. 1 was travelling all on my own to a place that I don't know any person at all.
I couldn't even say the language well ,but l wasn't going to let that stop me. Within a few month
after arriving in London, I fall in love with the city .I met some of the most amazing people from
all over the world.1 wasn't quite preparing for the culture shock of a different place at the
beginning of. But after one and half years ,I am accustomed to living there .I have realized our
views and ideas have changed completely in this country.
1.but—and 考查连词。句意:在我离开家去英国学习之前,我有些害怕但又有些兴奋。
2.that---where 考查定语从句。a place是先行词,定语从句I don't know any person at all缺少状语,故用where来引导。
3.say—speak 考查动词。Speak 用来表示语言。Say用来说内容。
4.month---months 考查名词的复数。A few months数月。
5.fall---fell 考查动词的时态。整个文章用一般过去时。
6.preparing---prepared 考查动词短语。Be prepared for 为。。做准备;
7.beginning of去掉of 考查介词短语。At the beginning在开始;
8. one and后面加a 考查固定短语。One and a half years一年半;
9. there---here 考查副词。句意:一年半年,我习惯了那的生活。There是这,here是那。
10.our—my 考查代词。句意:我意识到对于这个国家我的想法和观点变了。
(2015届河北省唐山一中五校联考):短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)
camping in the countryside. It was one of the excited experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and took a long walk every day. We cooked over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the trees, and I feel so peaceful. It doesn’t cost many to camp. What I believe it’s the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.
1.favouritest改为favourite 考查形容词。Favorite没有比较级和最高级。
2. families 改为family 考查名词。句意:去年,我的家人和我去农村野营。我的家庭故用单数形式。
3.excited改为exciting 考查形容词。Exciting用来修饰experience, excited用来修饰人;
4.never改为ever 考查副词。句意:这是我从来没有经历过的体验;
5.wonderfully改为wonderful 考查形容词。句意:我们生火,食物非常的美味。Taste 是半系动词 ,形容词做表语。
6.or改为and 考查连词。句意:整整一周,我喜欢这美丽的风景和呼吸新鲜空气。表示并列连接。
7.feel改为felt 考查动词的时态。And连接两个句子的时态保持一致,故与heard保持一致。
8.many改为much 考查代词。Much用来代指不可数名词Much money.
9.去掉What 考查句子结构。句意:我相信这是贴近大自然的最好的方式。
10. close后加to 考查固定短语。get close to靠近
(2015届四川省成都市检测)短文改错(共10小题海小题1.5分,满分15分。)
It is reported that lours and shops in a small town were struck by a flood on last Wednesday.
It had rained for four days while the river finally flowed over its banks and flood the town.
Hundred of residents left their homes as the water flowed down the streets and into their house.,, Fortunate, no one was killed in the flood and it caused a lot of damage and many people became
homeless. Two farms near the river was destroyed. Rescue workers managed reach the people there by boat. It’s the pity that many farm animals dead as the water rose.
1.on去掉 表示时间的名词前有last,next,every,this等限定词时前不加任何介词,故去掉on。
2.while—when/before while在„„期间,引导的时间状语从句中的谓语动词应该是延续性动词,题干中的flow是非延续性动词,故将其改为when,也可改为before。
3. flood ---flooded 根据语境是过去时,故此处用flooded。
4.Hundred—Hundreds hundred、thousand表示不确定的数量时用其复数形式,后跟of短语,故hundred改为hundreds。
5.Fortunate—Fortunately 此处应用副词修饰动词,故将fortunate改为fortunately。
6.and—but 此处的and前是没有人死于水灾,后面是但是水灾带来的巨大损失,前后是转折关系,故将and改为but。
7. was—were 该剧的主语是two farms,故将was改为were。
8. manage后加to manage后跟不定式作宾语,故其后加to。
9. the—a 根据句型It is a pity that„„判断将the改为a。