文字材料作文的写作步骤
文字作文的写作步骤
下面以“巢湖市2010届高三第一次数学质量检测”一次考试作文为例,谈谈文字材料作文写作步骤:
第二节 书面表达 (满分25分)
有些学生上学回家途中,不遵守交通规则。请你针对这一现象,写一篇英文演讲稿,呼吁全体同学提高安全意识。演讲稿的主要内容包括:
现象:
● 逆向行走,行走时追逐打闹;
● 骑车带人,并行骑车谈话;
● 驶入机动车道。
建议:
● 遇转弯车辆,不能靠得太近;
● 做到“绿灯行,红灯停”;
● 走人行横道线。
注意:
l、词数100左右;
2、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3、开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。
4、参考词汇:
人行横道crosswalk 机动车道motorway 安全意识security awareness
Good morning,my friends and teachers,
Some of us students are ignoring personal safety on the way to school and back home.__________
Thanks for listening!
一、列要点,并翻译。1、列出要点 2、要点连句
主要现象:
1、We often find students going in the opposite direction and chasing each other .
2、Also, it’s common to see students talking while riding ,with friends on their bikes or electric bikes .
3、And some are even going on the motorway.
采取建议:
1、Keep away from the vehicle turning around.
2、Keep in mind “red light for stop, green light for go”.
3、Take a crosswalk when crossing the driveway.
二、扩要点,加过渡、3、连句成文 (注意: 时间状语,地点状语和过度词的使用)
主要现象:
They don’t observe traffic regulations, which worries their parents and teachers much. …All the above can lead to serious injury, even death.
采取建议:
To prevent these tragedies, we should increase security awareness. Always remember:
三、结尾总结或个人观点
Life is above all. My friends and my classmates, to value our lives, we can never be too careful on the way.
Thanks for listening!
One possible version
They don't observe traffic regulations, which worries their parents and teachers much. We often find students chasing each other or talking while riding. Also, it's common to see students going in the opposite direction or taking, friends on their bikes or electric bikes. And some are even going on the motorway. All the above can lead to serious injury, even death.
To prevent these tragedies, we should increase security awareness. Always remember: Keep away from the vehicle turning around. Keep in mind
Life is above all. My friends and my classmates, to value our lives, we can never be careful enough on the way.
Thanks for listening!