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周报38B 回顾及作文讲解

一、完成句子

1. 面对着世界激烈的竞争，我们要不遗余力提升社交技能。

______ ______ a world of ______ _______, we’ll spare no efforts to ______ ______ ______.

2. 他一生投身于教育，无暇顾及家庭。

______ ______ education, he ______ _______ _______ his family.

______ ______ ______ education, ...

______ ______ education made him ______ ______ ______ ______ his family.

3. 这是一个致力于帮助中国人掌握英语和培养国际自信心的组织。

That is an organization ______ ______ helping Chinese people ______ ______ and ______ ______ ______.

4. 青少年中有一个共识做志愿者对未来的工作有益。

There is ______ _______ among teenagers ______ being a volunteer ______ ______ ______ ______ the future career.

5. 小时候经常看电视不能促进孩子的身体发育和语言发展。

______ ______ TV programs ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ promote children’s physical growth and language development.

6. 就是由于孩子和大人交流的减少导致了迟缓的脑部发育。

It is because ______ ______ _______ ______ in communication between adults and children ______ their brain development ______ _______.

7. 失业者可以通过职业培训来重新激发潜能找到工作。

______ _______ can reinvent their potential and regain a job ______ _______ _______ vocational education.

8. 一毕业，在特定领域里工作的毕业生需求很大。

_____ ________, the graduates who are able to work in a particular area ______ ______ ______ ______.

二、词性转换

1. 特别，尤其 a adv 尤其，特别 ______ __________

2. 正式的 a adv

非正式的 a adv 作正式访问_____ _______ _______ ______

3. 替代的 a adv 替代品 n 可替代能源______ ________ 除... 别无选择 ______ _______ ______ _________

4. 潜能a adv n 发挥潜能

5. 雇佣 v n 失业v n 失业者______ _________

6. 金融的 a adv 金融n 经济独立__________ __________

三、作文讲解

一）存在问题

1 未根据文中要求的顺序来描述，应该概括+举例+重要性+建议

2 举例时态错乱，应该时态统一一般过去时或一般现在时

二）段落欣赏

三）词组或句型参考

1. 行为不当、不礼貌

2. 随地吐痰

3. 大声喧哗

4. 乱扔垃圾

5. 在不该拍照的地方拍照

6. 乱涂乱画

7. 无视禁烟标志

8. 不爱护公共设施

9. 损害国人形象

10. 影响其它游客的心情

11. 给他人留下了极差的印象

12. 在公共场合谨慎自己的行为

13. 尊重当地文化

14. 赢得别人的尊重

15. 提升个人素质

16. 加强文明意识

17. 为其他游客营造一个愉悦的环境

18. 每个人承担起文明礼貌的职责

四）范文参考

The passage mainly informs us of some Chinese tourists ’ impolite and improper behavior when they travel abroad, which leaves a bad impression on other tourists both at home and abroad.

Take my experiences as an example. I often saw some tourists behave rudely, such as spitting, littering, speaking loudly and even carving words on walls, all of which affected my moods and made the trip unpleasant.

Actually, it ’s of great necessity for Chinese people to have an awareness of behaving themselves in public. For one thing, it ’s a duty for everyone to respect the local culture and protect scenic spots. For another, behaving politely reflects our personal quality and avoid damaging our national image.

So it ’s high time to strengthen the awareness of being civilized tourists. Firstly, do as the rules of scenic spots require us to do. Besides, in order to avoid misunderstanding, it ’s also a must to have a better understanding of local customs in advance.

五）总结提高作文的四大要素