高考作文指导

·2011年高考英语作文之山东卷

假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：

1．询问Tom的生活和学习情况；

2．谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；

3．告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。

注意：

1．词数：120-150；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

范文1

Dear Tom,

It’s a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything going with you? I am really happy to spend such an unforgettable experience with you here.

I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July this summer. I think the chance is of great importance for me. To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for it. However, I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials. Meanwhile, I find it hard to use English properly. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. I also hope that the great effort I am making will pay off.

You know, I have been missing you since you left, so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest. I can’t wait to see you again! Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

范文2

Dear Tom，

How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing. Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are.

Let me tell you a piece of good news: I’m going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation. So I’m busy preparing for it. But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English words to express my thoughts. Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation. Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions.

In addition, I’m going to visit you after the contest. I’m sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing! I can hardly wait to see you! Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours

Lihua

更多好用的表达方法：

1. I’m very excited to tell you that I will take part in an English speech contest held in Beijing in July.

2. To be honest, I find it difficult to collect useful information on the Internet.

3. Sometimes I seem not confident when speaking in the public. I know you have rich experience, so could you tell me how to improve my performance?

4. We haven’t seen each other for a long time, so I am going to visit you when the contest finishes.

5. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

6. I miss you so much.

7. Besides, it’s necessary for me to increase my vocabulary, but I’m afraid I don’ have enough time. What should I do?

8. Could you give me some details about your life in Beijing?

9. I can’t wait to hear your advice/suggestions!

10. Are you enjoying your school life in Beijing? I hope you are.

11. As you have more experience in speech competition, I need your help to improve my speaking skills.

12. Do remember to write to me.

13. I’m so excited that I even can’t fall asleep in the night!

14. Although I’ve tried my best(=However hard I have tried), I still find it hard to write a well-organized speech.

15. In this way, I can build up my confidence and do a good job in the contest.

16. Without a large vocabulary , I can’t express myself in a proper way.

17. I do need your help now!

18. So I’d like to ask you for some help.

19. I feel nervous when speaking in public; could you tell me how to build up my confidence?

20. Besides, I’m not good at using body language to express my feelings and thoughts. I do want to improve but don’t know how. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

2010山东高考英语作文范文

假设你是新华学校学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友TOM约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：

1 表示歉意 2 解释原因 3 另约时间。

注意：1 词数120——150 2 可适当增加细节。

Dear Tom,

It’s a long time since we met last time. I miss you very much.How’s

everything going?

I’m writing to say sorry to you because I can’t obey our

promise.Don’t be angry,please give me one minute to complain about it. In fact ,my mother asks me to visit my grandma that day.You know grandma is to me as what water is to fish.I had a good memory with her. And we

should spare no effort to take care of the old, shouldn’t we? Friend ,you’re still young but my grandma is old! Taking all these factors

into consideration,I decided to write the letter finally.

Let’s make it next Saturday ,I think you can understand me. Now, sorry

again, and I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

2009年高考山东卷英语作文

假设你是李华，曾在美国学校，现现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr.Smith.

但没有其联系方式，请根据以下几点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信：

1． 感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助；

2． 询问Mr. Smith的近况并索要其联系方式；

3． 邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。

注意：1.词数120-150； 2．可适当增加细节。

I am now back at China. In this letter I would like to convey my heart-felt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New York. Additionally, your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American

trip into a unforgettable memory.

I have been missing our English professor, Mr.Smith whose unusual cast of mind,wide and varied knowledge,together with a singular personal charm,combined to exert a strong influence on me.What about him recently? I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability.However,his email address is not available.So would you mind

delivering it to me via the online mailbox?

I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival -Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship.You can partner with me to have a try in lion dances ,which is extremely exciting. And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to impress you. I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did

at you home.

With my best regards !

Yours cordially,

Li Hua

2008山东高考英语作文范文

假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语(Q吧)给他写封信：1、

帮他分析原因； 2、给他提出建议； 3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。

注意：词数120 ~150

Dear Li Ming,

I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. That’s because you are new here and people don’t know about you. But I think you can make it if only

you can follow the advice below.

我知道你现在有麻烦与他人沟通,而且你可能经常感到孤独。那是因为你是新搬来的,人们不知道的关

于你的事。但我认为你能做到,如果只有你能遵从这项建议如下。

First, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other people’s views. Second, you should learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Then you can have much in common with them. This way, you can

get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. Last but not least, I’m always here ready to help. we can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.

首先,你应该积极参加讨论和展示你自己的意见,有关事宜,与此同时,学习聆听别人的意见。第二,你必须了解你的同学的好恶。然后你可以与他们有许多共同之处。这种方式,你能结识更多的不同的人,向他们表明你是一样友好。最后但并非最不重要,我总是在这里,准备“我们可以参加一些活动联系在一起,而我可以把

你介绍给别人。

With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do

as the above.

随着时间的推移,人们就会知道,你得更好,也会想和你做朋友吗?如果你可以做以上任何一件事情。

Best regards, 问候,

Zhang Hua 张华

2007山东高考英语作文范文

阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇120-150词的短文。

今年，教育部直属师范大学将招收一批免费师范生，学生毕业后须回生源所在省份的中小学任教十年以上。你愿意成为一名免费师范生吗？请陈述理由。

范文：

Recently I learned From the newspaper that normal universities belonging to the Education Department would recruit some students free. As a return,the students must serve as a primary school teacher for at least 10 years in his hometown. I feel that is a good news for me and I will contact the universities to get enrolled.

First of all, as a farmer's child, my family's living condition is not so good, I can hardly afford the high tuition of regular universities. I am so happy to get this chance to become a college student and coninue my study.

Secondly, serving as a teacher is my dream since I was a child. I was brought up in a mountain village. Many of my little friends got poor education and they had to get to work as a teenager. If I become a teacher, I will devote myself to giving them better education.

Lastly, our country is in great need of teachers, especially in rural areas. After I graduate, I will return to my hometown and serve as a good teacher.