英语四级交通作文

范文一：

问题：城市交通拥护解决方案：（solution）

1. 建造（lay down）更多道路

优点：降低街道拥护程度加速车流（flow of traffic）

缺点：占地过多

2.开辟（open up）更多公共汽车线路

优点：减少自行车与小汽车

缺点：对部分人可能造成不方便

结论：两者结合

With the development of industry and economy, more people from rural area are pouring into big cities and more vehicles are going on to the street. As a result, many cities are faced with the serious problem of traffic congestion, which has become one of the major concerns of the society.

To solve this problem, many people have put forward many solutions, of which the following two are the most typical. One is to lay down more roads, which will make the highways less crowded and accelerate the flow of traffic. Another is to open up more bus routes, which will enable more people to take buses rather than ride bikes or drive cars, thus decreasing the number of cars and bikes racing on the streets.

However, both of the suggestions have disadvantages. The former may occupy too much land, which may be otherwise put to better uses. The latter, on the other hand, will bring inconvenience to those who are living far away from the bus routes. The best

solution, in my opinion, seems to be the combination of the two： to lay down more roads in spacious areas and to open up more bus routes in downtown areas.

城市交通

城市交通

思路点拨

此图片描述的是一幅交通堵塞的场景。图片中，车一辆接着一辆地堵在街上，各种抱怨声不断。毫无疑问，这幅图反映的是城市交通的压力问题。同时，汽车过多就意味着尾气排放过多，所以这幅图同时又反映了环保和低碳问题。

第一段：描述图画；第二段：分析交通堵塞给人和环境带来的影响；第三段：建议措施。

思维拓展

建议措施部分，还可以从如下角度提出：

呼吁政府：投资完善基础设施、继续坚持限行的制度。

倡导低碳出行：步行、骑自行车。

倡导理智选择城市：人全部拥挤在大城市带来的负面影响。

高分范文

How horrible the traffic is! The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street. In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①. Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses. Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。

Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays. With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen. Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment. On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait. Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road. On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③ has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。

Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam. Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④ should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate. Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。

佳作妙译

交通状况真是一团糟！这幅漫画描述了街上糟糕的交通堵塞的场景。实际上，交通堵塞严重到了一定程度，与其说这是一条拥挤的街道，还不如说这是一个停车场。焦急的乘客等不到数量稀少的公交车，而私家车却到处都是。

虽然这幅图有点夸张，但是当今这种现象并不罕见。私家车的增多必然产生大城市交通堵塞。大城市沉重的交通压力会给人民生活带来不便，也会对环境造成负面影响。一方面，一旦发生堵车，原来很近的路程似乎变得十分漫长，除了等没有别的办法，大量的宝贵时间被浪费在路上。另一方面，汽车排放的尾气更增加了环境的负担、导致了碳排放，这和低碳生活的理念相违背。

因此，应该采取有效措施缓解严重的交通堵塞问题。第一，通过提高税费限制私家车拥有率(保有量)。第二，应该鼓励和推广低碳的公交车、地铁等公共交通工具，以便我们拥有更顺畅的交通。

名师点评

① it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B的结构，通过字面可以理解成：更多的是A而不是B。

翻译的时候，往往翻译成：与其说是B，不如说是A。

反过来，当我们想用英语表达“与其……不如……”的时候，我们可以采用这个结构。

实际上，这个结构在历年真题阅读中曾多次出现。如2000年Text 3中的选项：Futurist poetry is more of a transient phenomenon than literature。

② With the number of private cars increasing: with 短语表伴随，翻译成“随着”。 ③ exhausted gas emitted by cars: 其中emitted by cars是过去分词短语作后置定语。 相当于定语从句：gas which is emitted by cars(被汽车排放的尾气)。

写法：请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。

④ taxes levied on the sales of private cars: 其中levied on the sales of private

cars(针对私家车被征的税)，为过去分词做定语。写法：请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。

6级作文范文

Traffic on the city like a personal physical blood, only to maintain its smooth flow in order to guarantee the healthy functioning of the body. City traffic problems in the process of urbanization is inevitable, which is based on the generation of people in the city at the same time in different directions with each other and led to waste and urban layout of the network and traffic management.

The world to solve the traffic problems are many ways in different regions and different problems to solve the traffic problem is not the same. Xi'an is an ancient city, subject to the protection of cultural and historical features, Xi'an traffic management is very difficult. According to the local characteristics of Xi'an, I think that management may choose to have the following:

1. Functional co-existence to live. That is, as far as possible, to work and live together or nearby. Most of China's enterprises and institutions at the county level cities and towns are basically

2. Active second-hand housing. People living in cities is dispersed,

3. Stagger to and from work. The correlation is not high on the functions of the department to stagger the work, break down the traffic pressure.

4. Dynamic management of parking. Prime time, the downtown section of high-value added, increase efficiency and ease pressure on parking.

5. City road signs marking the efficiency of the concept. The development of new or extended (to build) the road, as far as possible, using simple and easy to identify marks, such as New York's First Avenue, Second Avenue and so on, Yantai Development Zone in this area well. North-South Road are known as a number of mountains, rivers and the East-West Road was named.

6. Rail transportation. Fast rail transit, environmental protection, the general public, on time. Rail transportation in Japan is Tokyo's major cities and satellite traffic. In the long run, the conditions outside the city of Xi'an in the region to build the track is necessary. The total length of 15 km around the city whether or not he can use to develop into a city full of characteristics of water transport