英语写作提高
新概念英语之写作提高
写作要素:1~3术,4道,结合为势,即精彩作文
1 词汇层面:高频词汇、金牌词组
2 句式层面:黄金句型、钻石句型、句型分布(从涛哥公共邮箱里下新概念句型分布)3 语法层面:重点语法、语法应用、语法分布
4思维层面:中英词类对比、中英主语对比、中英定语对比、中英状语对比、中英结构对比例:
Verazano是意大利人,对于他知之甚少。他于1524年驶入了纽约港(NCE3;L17)
中式思维:Verazano was an Italian. Little was known about him. He sailed into the New York harbor in 1524.
英式思维:Verazano, an Italian about whom little was known, sailed into the New York harbor in 1524.
提示:汉语式动词平行结构语言,故汉语多见并列句;英语式动词分层次结构语言,写英语句子时,先强调几个并列句中个动词并将含有此动词的句子作为主句,然后用短语和从句来弱化其他动词。从而写出复杂句。
从前有座山,山上有座庙,庙里有个小和尚。
Once upon a time, there was a mountain, on the top of the mountain there was a temple, and in the temple there was an old monk.
Once upon a time, there was a mountain on the top of which stood a temple where an old monk lived.
Tom经常偷我们的内裤,他的行为令我们尴尬。
Tom often steals our underwear. His behavior embarrasses us.
Tom often steals our underwear, which embarrasses us.
That Tom often steals our underwear embarrasses us.
Tomʼs behavior embarrasses us that he often steals our underwear.
他跌跌撞撞第进入房间,头发(是)又长又脏乱蓬蓬的,衣服(是)污迹斑斑、破破烂烂,脚拇指头还露在鞋外面。
He hobbled into the room. His hair was long, dirty and unkempt, kis clothes were stained and tattered and his toes stuck out of the shoes.
He hobbled into it, hair long, dirty and unkempt, clothes stained and tattered, and toes sticking out of the shoes.