话题 1 如何用英语描写个人情况
话题 1 如何用英语描写个人情况 Personal information
必走三步
国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平·友谊”夏令营活动，要求报
2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步：认真审题，提炼要点
一审格式：这篇作文是应用文——个人简介，也是一篇人物介绍型的说明文。根据内容提示应该分三部分来写：第一部分写个人基本信息；第二部分写爱好、性格、态度；第三部分写参加夏令营的目的。
二审结构：谓语多用一般现在时；主语多用第一人称。
三审要点：用英语思维，理出写作要点。
be interested in photography like classical music
love life，nature and peace a girl of sixteen，at Beijing Sunshine Middle School make friends
第二步：紧扣主题，扩点成句
I'm also interested in photography．
Through my hobbies，I've made many friends．
I like meeting new people and enjoy talking with them．
I appreciate friends' help．
I love life，nature，and peace，hate any form of violence．
I would like to join the Peace & Friendship Summer Camp．
It is a great opportunity to make friends．
第三步：补充修改，连句成篇
I'm Wang Shan，a girl of sixteen，presently attending Beijing Sunshine Middle School．I like music，especially classical music．I'm also interested in photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life．Through my hobbies，I've made many friends．In fact，I like meeting new people and enjoy talking with them．Believing we all need help from each other，I appreciate friends' help，and I'm willing to help anyone in need．
I love life，I love Mother Nature，and I love peace．I hate any form of violence．
I would like to join the Peace & Friendship Summer Camp since it would be a great opportunity to make friends with young people from different countries and learn about their cultures．
满分作文——满分说明文一
你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的基本情况。短文应包括下列全部内容。
注意：1．情况介绍必须采用短文形式；
2．词数 100 左右；
3．短文第一句已为你写好。
生词：竞赛 — competition (n．)
范文：
My name is Li Hua．I was born in Dalian，Liaoning province in February 1977．At the age of seven I went to school．I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990．From then on I studied in No.6 Middle School of Dalian．And I graduated this summer．The subjects I have to learn at school are Chinese，Maths，English，Physics，Chemistry and Computer．I am very good at English and computer．I won the first prize in the computer competition of school last year．In spare time I like listening to the pop music and collecting stamps．And I like swimming and skating，too．
点评
内容丰富，详略得当，层次分明，条理清楚，时态把握得很好，连接成分运用也恰到好处，“at the age of”、“from then on”等，使文章读来朗朗上口。
必做练习
你是方明，今年已满 18 岁，平时喜欢游泳和打篮球，还会拉小提琴等，你想在暑假期间找一份工作，请你写一封信给当地人才交流中心申请一份工作，随信附上你的电话以及电子邮件地址([email protected])
注意：
信的开头已给出；词数 100 左右。
Dear Sir，
I have graduated from No.1 Middle School of Beijing and would like to...
答案：
Dear Sir，
I have graduated from No.1 Middle School of Beijing and would like to apply for a job during this summer vacation．I am 18 years old．I can play the violin and I like to play basketball．And I am also a good swimmer．I believe that I can do my best in one job．If you will accept me，I'll be happy．You can contact me on the following number or at the address．Tel：66775339 E-mail：[email protected]
I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
Yours truly，
Fang Ming