2016年全国各地高考真题写作精品范文集合

2016年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试新课标I 卷

第二节 书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume ）。给

外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format ）

注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。

写作范文1

Dear Ms. Jenkins,

I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I’m writing to ask for your help. I’m applying

for a parttime job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just com

pleted my application letter and resume. however, I am not quite sure of the language and the forma

t I’ve used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could take some ti

me to go through them and make necessary changes. please find my application letter and resume in

the

attachment.

Thank you for your kindness!

Yours,

Li Hua

写作范文2

Dear Ms. Jenkins,

I’m Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I’m writing to ask for your help. I’m ap-

plying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have

just completed my application letter and resume. however, I am not quite sure of the language and

the format I’ve used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I’d be very grateful if you could

take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. please find my application letter

and resume in the attachment.

Thank you for your kindness!

Yours,

Li Hua

2016年高考全国丙卷（全国）英语

第二节书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter 写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括：

1．主题：环境保护；

2．展览时间；

3．投稿邮箱：[email protected].

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Peter, Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Pho-tograph y Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from

June15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I

know youtake good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental

protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that themethe last time you visitedour school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, youcan

send your photos to [email protected].

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours

Lihua

【名师点睛】

本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，要点扩充合情合理，符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展

览的理由符合逻辑：对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化，并没有一直使用陈述句，穿插

使用祈使句，符合邀请函的特点。文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate.时间状语从句.... themethe last time you visitedour school. 条件状语从句If you want to join....；等。全文没有中国式英语句式，体现出很高的驾

驭英语的能力。

考点：考查半开放作文

3.2016年高考全国丙卷（全国Ⅲ）英语

第二节书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob 约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，

内容包括：

1. 表示歉意；

2. 说明原因；

3. 另约时间。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】

Dear Bob,

I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just

found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not

cause you too much trouble.

Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

考点：书信类作文

【名师点睛】

题目是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出，表

达歉意的同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。

4.2016普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（北京卷）

第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35 分）

第一节（15分）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim 回信，内容包括：

1. 该人物是谁；

2. 该人物的主要贡献；

3. 该人物对你的影响。

注意：

1. 词数不少于50；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

_____________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________

____ _____________________________________________________________________ Yo urs,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Jim,

It ’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.

As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern tech-nologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world.

Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.

Cheers!

Yours,

Li Hua

考点：应用文写作

【名师点睛】

题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。

第二节（ 20 分）

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。

请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语

角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

提示词：地球日Earth Day

【答案】

Actions for a Greener Earth

A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.

Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especial-ly little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and expe-rience with all the students of our school.

We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.

亮点说明：范文使用了非谓语动词calling upon us to join in the actions和so...that 句型与宾语从句we can do more for a better world等，句式多样；还使用了固定词组call sb to do sth, join in, come up with. Make use of, turn...into, give away, be proud of等，使作文内容变得丰富。

考点：情景作文

【名师点睛】

话题比较常规，整体难度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容，考生并不陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。一定要按照四幅图的顺序来写，不可打乱顺序；注意行文的连贯性，多使用一些连接词。

2016普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（江苏卷）

第五部分：书面表达（满分25分）

81. 请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

I n recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher ” and the “ Cutest Baby”.

Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer 冶 competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’ daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.

Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future Singer冶 competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.

【写作内容】

1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2. 用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2 ~3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

【答案】

Possible version one:

On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not. In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary vot-ing events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes survey-ing and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Inter-net makes instant feedback possible.

To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting. (150 words)

Possible version two:

Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, zxxk and active in doing it.

In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don’t want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are pos-sibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.

In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. There-fore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.

(150 words)

【名师点睛】

本篇范文很好地完成了所有任务。文章结构合理，层次分明。第一段总结归纳短文内容提出网络投票很流行，给人们带来好处同时也有不利之处。第二段提出个人观点并给出理由，两篇范文中正反观点明确，论据有力；第三段中提出合理化建议；时态和人称运用准确无误无误，全文无中国式英

语思维，体现出很高的运用语言的能力。从写作技巧来看，文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句..... in which candidates go around to seek supports.状语从句.....if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.同时文章中串联词运用较为合理，如in my opinion、in addition、furthermore 、to be honest等等。

考点：考查任务型读写

2016普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（天津卷）

第三部分： 写作

第二节：书面表达（满分25分）

61. 假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。

（1） 回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；

（2） 谈谈收获或感情；

（3） 表达祝愿语期望。

注意：

（1） 词数不少于100；

（2） 可适当加入细节，是内容充实、行文连贯；

（3） 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear friends,

Thank you.

【答案】略

【解析】这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。

【考点定位】考查提纲作文

【名师点睛】这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。根据要求确定要点，适当对要点进行发挥。关键在于词汇和句式的选用，尽量使用简洁的语言。

2016普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（浙江卷）

第二节：书面表达（满分30分）

“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题目用英语写一篇100-120词的短文。

要求如下：

1. 简述你对这句名言的理解；

2. 用一个具体事例加以说明；

3. 给出恰当的结尾。学. 科网

注意：1. 文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：

2. 文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。

Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better

【答案】One possible student version

Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better

Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronun-ciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner. I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.

【名师点睛】本篇范文短小精悍，结构合理，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan 的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施这点非常重要。在文中作者用到了短语in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to等短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。

考点：考查开放式作文

2016年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（上海卷） I. Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：

（4） 描述调研数据；

（5） 分析可能导致这一结果的原因。

写作范文2

A survey conducted recently indicates that the parents who are proud of their children are twenty percent more than the children who consider themselves as prides of their parents. There exist two reasons, which may account for this subtle different. First, conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their kids. This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong sense of self-confidence. Second, the current educational system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance, thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. This bias unfairly undermines the

significance of talents for art and sports, which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves.

Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam-oriented educational methods, a kid would never end up with a positive grown-up.

2016年普通高等学校全国统一考试（四川卷）

第二节书面表达（满分25分）

第二节书面表达（满分25分）

某中学生英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投

稿，内容包括：

1. 你最喜欢的季节；

2. 你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受„„）。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 题目已为你写好；

3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；

4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。

2016年四川高考英语书面表达参考文章（满分25分）

（4） Possible Version 1:

The Season I Like Best

Each of us knows that there are four seasons in a year. Different people like different seasons; my favorite season is spring. I love to smell the fragrance of flowers, see the green trees and hear the singing of small birds. There are many busy butterflies and bees over the flowers. Sometimes it rains, but usually rains quietly. The rain moistens(= wets) the trees and flowers. And I can play out-side, too! Whether we like riding bikes, jogging or going on long walks, spring allows us to enjoy outdoor activities that we had to put on the back burner during winter. Of course, there are many other reasons to explain why I’m so excited about the spring. Thank you, spring！

(120 words)

（5） Possible Version 2：

The Season I Like Best

Spring, the symbol of beauty and hope, is the season I like best.

I am fond of spring because it treats me poetic scenery of nature. Blooming flowers add vivid colors to my sight. Also, the symphony of all kinds of insects and birds brings aesthetic (美学的) harmony to me. What’s more, the gentle rain makes spring a fantasy world.

And it’s because spring arouses everyone’s hope that I’m keen on spring most. Look! The fro-zen ice is melting. Listen! All living creatures are waking up. Spring pictures a world where cold and death are fading away while warmth and life are coming back. Thus, everyone is bound to be filled with hope and love.

I love spring, which can’t be too admirable and cherished.

(129 words)

（6） Possible Version 3：

The Season I Like Best

As we know, there are four seasons in a year. When it comes to our favorite season, opinions are divided from person to person. And my favorite season is summer.

Summer is a season with many kinds of green plants. Small trees are growing to become good trees that can supply places to farmers to have a rest. Rice in the fields looks more attractive when it rains. In a word, I love summer because all the things in summer are energetic.

What’s more, it is interesting to see stars after dinner. The stars in summer are the most beauti-ful in the year. I often sit under the wonderful sky with my parents to discuss which star is the brightest one.

The world is fantastic because of the change of seasons. We are supposed to love and enjoy every season!

(140 words)

（7） Possible Version 4:

The Season I Like Best

A year is composed of four seasons. Every season has its own advantages. Nevertheless, I re-gard spring as my favorite season.

One of the main reasons why I like spring best is that the climate in spring is cool. What’s more, it’s beneficial for people to stay focused. As a result, it’s efficient for people to work and study. That’s why many people like spring best.

Another reason is that scenes in spring are beautiful. I do think that people can relax themselves and get excited when they see these fantastic scenes.

This is my favorite season---- spring. I love it because it’s colorful and poetic.

(106 words)