英语作文易犯错误

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学生作文易犯错误分析 夏振邦 批注

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修饰语要紧靠被修饰的成份，如无法做到就要改变句子结构。

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定语从句which…不明确。可改为：Keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

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at the age of six的主语是my father，所以要改成：When I was six (years old), my father …

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主语living standard和having carried out之间没有逻辑关系。应改为：Since economic reforms have been carried out in our country, people’s living standard…

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和前一句类似的错误。应改为：To improve one’s writing skill, one must take a regular practice.

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it要改为they，和fruit and vegetables保持一致。

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第二个are要改为is，和主语one serious problem保持一致。

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we应改为you。祈使句的暗含主语为you。

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语法结构保持一致，前后用相同的结构，形成并列。

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结构要并列，可改为：While the number of vehicles is reduced, the speed of traffic can be increased.

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People want to eat not only more but also better.

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比较级的可比性。The price is milk isn’t higher than that of grain.

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a nation, the world, 和human beings是并列的结构，所以要改为：The energy problem is

currently of great concern to a nation, to the world, and to human beings.

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宾语从句中的that可以省略，但当有两个以上时，第二个起的that不可省略。

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and前后的结构要并列。可改为：and it is also beneficial to our characters’

training。

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错误类型同前。可改为：warned me of the difficulty of the course and the length of it或waned me how difficult the course was and how long it lasted。

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错误类型同前。可改为：and its beautification of our cities。

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从句不能单独成句；没有动词的不能单独成句

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改为：life, because we…

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改为：environment, since …

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改为：traffic, for example, widening the streets. 或traffic. For example, we may widen the streets and build …

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改为：advantages, such as cleanness and cheapness.

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改为：traits, such as a good sense of humor, …

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改为：An example of this is the three big department stores, which are within

a mile of each other

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缺少必要的连词，不使用连词

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缺少连词，可改为：If one should improve his English, he should overcome

difficulties in studies.

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在列举同一方面几点时应用for one thing, for another而on the one hand, on the other hand是指一个问题的两个方面。

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faster用错。speed只与high, low, good, top, normal, fantastic, moderate, surprising搭配, 不与fast, quick, slow搭配。但car可以和fast和slow搭配。

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错误类型同上。price: high, low, inflated, moderate, minimum, original, popular, prevailing, published, reduced, reasonable; 不和expensive, cheap搭配。但milk可以和expensive和cheap搭配。

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knowledge要和acquire, obtain, develop, enlarge, gain, pursue, deepen, accumulate, pick up等搭配。

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opportunity: rare, scanty, little, poor; great, ample abundant, favorable, good, golden, convenient. chance: small.

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people应改为：the number of people…因为people和decrease搭配意思是‘人变小了’。decrease和increase可和production, consumption, percentage等搭配。类似有“看书”look book, see book。

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同上。grain应改为：the consumption of grain…

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主要表现在词的用错。

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industrious改为industrial

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economic改为economical。同样地，considerate，considerable；imaginary，imaginative；respectful，respectable，respective。

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continual改为continuous. continual为断断续续的“继续”；continuous为持续不断的“继续”，中间无“间断”。

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highly改为high。highly表示“非常，很”，a highly motivated person；或表示“赞许地”，speak highly of sb. 而表示“高”意时是没有ly的，score high，jump high。同样，near，nearly；hard，hardly；

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First改为 At first意思为“首先”。

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every day改为everyday, 意思：日常的daily。同样的，all together和altogether。

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及物动词和不及物动词，主动和被动

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happen为不及物动词。Narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents to happen.

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take place没有被动语态形式。A great change has taken place since then.

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occur为不及物动词。Some new problems may occur.

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比较级问题。… will be far more beautiful than it is now.

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非谓语动词，现在分词，过去分词的主动与被动

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polluting改为being polluted

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Comparing改为Compared…

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will expose to…改为will be exposed to…

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standard与improve应该是被动的关系，应改为With people’s living standard greatly being improved they can afford expensive goods.

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习惯用法，冠词，单、复数

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by feet改为on foot

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可数名词和不可数名词

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much useful information

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If there are no power, factories would stop producing goods, cars, buses, and trains would have to stop running.

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The number of bicycles…

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A large number of people…

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Fewer and fewer people…

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Each person has…